"Khwaish" Rishto Ki Mehak Zinda Ho To Wahi Zindagi Hai!!!!

by khwaish on January 24, 2011, 02:24:37 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 25, 2011, 06:06:43 PM »
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bin rishton ke jeena bhi iss duniya me bewazah sa lagta hai......
waaah khwaish bro ..jawab nahi aapka..bahoot khoob
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«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2011, 02:54:28 AM »
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Khawish jee!aap kee is anmol kawish kaa labbolubaab mai apne ek sher ke zariye kahnaa chaahooNgee....

RishtoN ke darmiyaaN jab sawaaloN kaa jaal aayaa
Jazb e anaa kee khatir tab sheeshe me baal aayaa

sach hee hai rishte jab juRte haiN to uskee mahak door talak jaatee hai or jab yahee rishte jab chatakte haiN to dard or ghutan kaa ahasaas sirf tootne waale ko hee mahsoos hotaa hai...
kaash keh har rishtaa apni umra mukammal kare...

baharhaal aap ne rishtoN kee darkan ko aawaaz dee or ye aawaaz dhahte rishtoN ko bachaane me kaamyaab ho...yahee duaa hai...khush raheN...
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«Reply #17 on: January 27, 2011, 04:40:36 AM »
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Ek choti si koshish iska jawab dene ki..
bahaut dino baad kisi nazm kay jawab main kuch likh raha hoon..

Main tujse khafa toh nahin mager juda zaroor hoon,
Bichad gaye jo ek baar toh jazbaat badal jaya karte hai..

Tu bhale muskurahat saja le labon par mager sach hai yeh,
Toote jo dil toh muskurate chehre dafan hojaya karte hai..

Tu aur main aj bhi haath thame hue hai lekin kahin suna tha,
Aa jaye jo dararein; toh rishte aksar khatam hojaya karte hai..

Aj tootne kay baad tu kehta hai ‘mujhe tu aj bhi apna sa lagta hai’,
Ehsas jo waqt pe na darshaya jaye woh aksar adhure rehjaya karte hai..

Tu toh leh main doobke main najane kya kya likh jata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager hum teri nazmon main ban bewaffa badnaam hojaya karte hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #18 on: January 27, 2011, 05:11:10 AM »
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wahwah khwahishji....

ek ek baat dil main utar gai... bahut hi khub...

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«Reply #19 on: January 30, 2011, 06:44:59 AM »
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Rishto Ki Mehak Zinda Ho To Wahi Zindagi Hai Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Bin Rishto Ke Jeena Bhi Iss Duniya Mein Be-wajah Sa Lagta Hai..


Very True... Very True... Khwaish Ji... Salaam...
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«Reply #20 on: January 31, 2011, 03:01:30 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye



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«Reply #21 on: January 31, 2011, 03:05:52 PM »
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khwaish ji bahut kamaal ka likha hai as usual .
last 2 lines r very beautiful.
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«Reply #22 on: February 19, 2011, 06:36:36 PM »
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Kya kahu khwaish ji...jaise sab khuch tham sa gaya ho....abhi ek post padhi.. jisme ek ladki k liye samjhote ka zikr tha.....uss waqt mai asamanjas mein thi k kya samjhote zindagi k liye zaruri ho jaate hai...aapki ye rachna padhkar khuch aise hi jwaab mil gaye....yha har insaan kisi na kisi mod par samjhota karta hai phr bhi kha jaata hai k samjhote se zindagi nahi chalti....
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«Reply #23 on: February 22, 2011, 05:32:29 PM »
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khwaish ji.......ye poem padhkar aaj bht gehre tak dil me hulchal ho gai...yun laga jaise mere hi dil me dabi chhupi batein likh di hon aapne..kai dinon se jo kuch andar hi andar chal raha tha aaj jaise bahar aagaya......
pehle bhi kai bar padhi aapki ye post lekin aaj jo feel hua wo pehle nahin hua......aapki ek laajawab creation hai ye...mere dil k bhtttttttt kareeb ...hamesha sanjo k rakhne layak post hai ji ye aapki.....
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«Reply #24 on: June 30, 2011, 02:13:16 PM »
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Ek choti si koshish iska jawab dene ki..
bahaut dino baad kisi nazm kay jawab main kuch likh raha hoon..

Main tujse khafa toh nahin mager juda zaroor hoon,
Bichad gaye jo ek baar toh jazbaat badal jaya karte hai..

Tu bhale muskurahat saja le labon par mager sach hai yeh,
Toote jo dil toh muskurate chehre dafan hojaya karte hai..

Tu aur main aj bhi haath thame hue hai lekin kahin suna tha,
Aa jaye jo dararein; toh rishte aksar khatam hojaya karte hai..

Aj tootne kay baad tu kehta hai ‘mujhe tu aj bhi apna sa lagta hai’,
Ehsas jo waqt pe na darshaya jaye woh aksar adhure rehjaya karte hai..

Tu toh leh main doobke main najane kya kya likh jata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager hum teri nazmon main ban bewaffa badnaam hojaya karte hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

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Waah Waah Waah!!! bahut bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Bahut Hi Jaandaar peskash..Bahut Ache
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