"Khwaish" Uss Rote Hue Par Hi kyon Dil Mera Aksar Gaya!!!!

by khwaish on February 02, 2011, 12:29:57 PM
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Koi Jaldi To  koi Rukhkar Gaya
Aakhir Mein Har Musafir Apne Ghar Gaya

Kuch Nishnaaiyan Hi Sirf Ab Baaki Hai!!!
Woh Jo Bahut Bolte the, Naa Jaane Kidhar Gaya

Duniyadaari nibhaane Ke liye Jo Apna Zameer Tak Bech Dete Hai!!
Meri maano To,Zindagi ka Samjho Sabse Keemti Zevar Gaya..

Yahan Sirf Aati Hui Saanson Se Zindagi Toli Jaati Hai!!!
 Waqt ke Haathon, Ache-Acho ka Yahan Tevar Gaya...

Pyaar ka Ehsaas Zinda Ho To  Zindagi Hai!!
Mere Rooh Ko Kaun Hai Jo Iss kadar Chukar Gaya..

Tabdeeliyon Ne Mujhe Kuch Iss Kadar Badla!!!
Dekh kar Apni Zindagi Ka Aaena, Main Darr Gaya

Duniya kehti Hai Rote Hue Ko Dekhkar Nazare Ferna Seekho!!!
"Khwaish" Nadaan Hai,Uss Rote Hue Par Hi Kyon Dil Mera Aksar Gaya...
 
                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 12:38:29 PM »
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bht khoob khawish ji....
i lyk 5th one alot....
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 12:43:35 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 02, 2011, 12:38:29 PM
bht khoob khawish ji....
i lyk 5th one alot....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Priyaji..Aapne Pasand farmaya Teh Dil Se Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 12:45:40 PM »
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Bahut khoob khwaish ji..
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 12:47:31 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 02, 2011, 12:45:40 PM
Bahut khoob khwaish ji..

Tuada tehhh Dilll To shukar-guzaar Hai geetji.. icon_flower

Par Eh Ki Geetji, Pubjabi Ajj kidde Gayi tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 12:50:37 PM »
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khwaish ji very touchy and fantastic poem. greaaaaaaaaaat.
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Tabdeeliyon Ne Mujhe Kuch Iss Kadar Badla!!!
Dekh kar Apni Zindagi Ka Aaena, Main Darr Gaya

Bahut khoob raha yeh khayaal aapka ... Khwaish Ji !

dil se daad ! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 01:49:59 PM »
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Waise main quote karne jaoun toh puri nazm lajawab hai..
Mager mere dil kay behad kareeb 2nd, 5th, 6th aur 7th stanza's rahe..
bahaut bahaut khoob mere bhai..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 02:33:37 PM »
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khwaish ji kya kahu koi shabd nahi mere paas......

shayad zindagi ka sabse bada sach ye hi he jo apne likha he...

bahot khubsurati se pesh kiya he apne........

bahot bahot badhaiya and thx ise share karne ke liye...
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 03:14:35 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 02, 2011, 12:50:37 PM
khwaish ji very touchy and fantastic poem. greaaaaaaaaaat.
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Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooooo Much Sureshji..

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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2011, 03:55:40 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mere bhai.........kya hi khoob likha hai aapne........har jajba sachchai se bharpoor......har ashar beshkeemati.......... Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2011, 07:28:15 PM »
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Khoob Khwaish Ji...
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 07:52:07 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on February 02, 2011, 01:45:54 PM
Tabdeeliyon Ne Mujhe Kuch Iss Kadar Badla!!!
Dekh kar Apni Zindagi Ka Aaena, Main Darr Gaya

Bahut khoob raha yeh khayaal aapka ... Khwaish Ji !

dil se daad ! Applause Applause Applause

Aapka teh Dil Se Shukriya nareshji..

Aapne Apna Keemti waqt Diya, Yeh jaankar bahut Khushi Hui Hai icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 07:58:17 AM »
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bahut khub khwahishji...

daad.. bahut....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2011, 12:01:30 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish JI ApplauseApplause
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