"Khwaish" Uss Rote Hue Par Hi kyon Dil Mera Aksar Gaya!!!!

by khwaish on February 02, 2011, 12:29:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2011, 02:57:42 PM »
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Waise main quote karne jaoun toh puri nazm lajawab hai..
Mager mere dil kay behad kareeb 2nd, 5th, 6th aur 7th stanza's rahe..
bahaut bahaut khoob mere bhai..
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Khush rahiye..!

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!!

Yuhi Saath dete Rahiyega Dost!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: February 22, 2011, 05:22:28 PM »
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khwaish ji....kai din se aapki post par reply dene ki koshish karrahi hun..lekin ...nahin de paa rahi...aaj fir ek koshish ki lekin ... sad5...ye rachna jab apadhi thi ajeeb si kasak uthi thi man me....kuch likhna hi lekin waqt ki kami k karan nahin likh pai..par koshish karungi k likh paun.....
ek behtareen post hai ye aapki..bht hi dil chhuti hui aur sach dikhati hui......
yunhi hamesha zindagi k rang kaagaz par bikherte rahiye ...aur zindagi jeena sikhate rahiye....
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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2011, 11:41:15 AM »
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khwaish ji kya kahu koi shabd nahi mere paas......

shayad zindagi ka sabse bada sach ye hi he jo apne likha he...

bahot khubsurati se pesh kiya he apne........

bahot bahot badhaiya and thx ise share karne ke liye...

Thankyou Sooooooooo Much Uthkarshji Jo Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko padha AUr isme chupe hue ehsaas ko samjha..teh dil se shukriya aapka icon_flower
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«Reply #18 on: September 08, 2011, 07:34:05 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mere bhai.........kya hi khoob likha hai aapne........har jajba sachchai se bharpoor......har ashar beshkeemati.......... Applause Applause

Sanjeev Bro..Aapne Apna Waqt Diya,Yehi Bahut Hai Mere Liye..


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«Reply #19 on: October 03, 2011, 12:47:57 PM »
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Koi Jaldi To  koi Rukhkar Gaya
Aakhir Mein Har Musafir Apne Ghar Gaya

Kuch Nishnaaiyan Hi Sirf Ab Baaki Hai!!!
Woh Jo Bahut Bolte the, Naa Jaane Kidhar Gaya

Duniyadaari nibhaane Ke liye Jo Apna Zameer Tak Bech Dete Hai!!
Meri maano To,Zindagi ka Samjho Sabse Keemti Zevar Gaya..

Yahan Sirf Aati Hui Saanson Se Zindagi Toli Jaati Hai!!!
 Waqt ke Haathon, Ache-Acho ka Yahan Tevar Gaya...

Pyaar ka Ehsaas Zinda Ho To  Zindagi Hai!!
Mere Rooh Ko Kaun Hai Jo Iss kadar Chukar Gaya..

Tabdeeliyon Ne Mujhe Kuch Iss Kadar Badla!!!
Dekh kar Apni Zindagi Ka Aaena, Main Darr Gaya

Duniya kehti Hai Rote Hue Ko Dekhkar Nazare Ferna Seekho!!!
"Khwaish" Nadaan Hai,Uss Rote Hue Par Hi Kyon Dil Mera Aksar Gaya...
 
                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


veri naaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #20 on: October 03, 2011, 02:05:55 PM »
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Khoob Khwaish Ji...

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Hum Dumji icon_flower
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