Kiran...flame of love

by Naya_Daur on January 31, 2007, 06:04:29 PM
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kya kahu tujhe main eh pyaar ki moorat
teri chawi kissi lafz ki mohataaj nahi

kabhi ek jalti low ho pak-mohha'bat ki
sirf sat rango mein simm'ta jiska jahan nahi

kabhi Shabnam samaan pavitar aagni ho
jiske samne kissi aag ka koi tej nahi

kabhi mammta ka anchal ban prem barsaye
chu paye tere parivar ko,aisi koi hawa nahi

chanchal,alharad nadi sa weg tumhara
haar kar rukna jiska kabhi sabhaw nahi

jis sung kadam mila lo,taqdeer badal jaye uski
jo na samjhe teri ehmiyaat,woh shayad insaan nahi...!!!
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~JEET*
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2007, 06:15:10 AM »
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Amazing.... Just Superb...
Jeet... Really very nice work ... =D>
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2007, 02:51:15 PM »
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Thanks Shikha ji.. Kissi ki personality par likhne ki koshish kar raha tha... Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2007, 11:13:59 PM »
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nIce Jeet ... ho gai aap ki Jeet
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2007, 04:16:41 AM »
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Almost :D.... thanks!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2007, 04:19:27 AM »
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WAH!!!!! kya baat hai ..bahut hi sunder ji ....wonderful likha hai ...jeet .good
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2007, 06:47:24 PM »
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Very nice Jeet...bohot hi achcha likha hai tumne ! Usual Smile
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2007, 01:45:38 PM »
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Thanks ranjana n Talat

ranjana ji ,, aap pehli bar mere thread mein likhe bina gaye... sad5 :evil:
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2007, 01:49:59 PM »
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Rang lakh baharon ke
sab tere damaan se ujhre hue

mann mein jalti low mohabbat ki
teri do mirg naino ke tejas se

jab muskaraye toh sarri duniya khille
ruthe jab toh mera jahaan ujard jaye

Aadayein aaisi ki Pal mein behka de
Mujh jaise tuute ko bhi pal mein bana de

naam tera hawa nahi,aor
hirani se bard kar hai tu chanchal

khud se jayada bharosa hai Jeet mujhe
woh shayad tere liye khudko bhi mitta de
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2007, 09:12:19 AM »
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wonderful   Jeet...............  bahot khoob
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2007, 03:20:46 PM »
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bahoot hi ache jeet!! dono poems achi likhi hai!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2007, 05:39:06 AM »
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yah rang kaisa  fiza mein chaa gaya
jab tu bahaar ban ke yun zindagi mein aa gaya

mehak uthe na jaane kitne gulaab yahan
har taraf ek madoshi sa nasha chhaa gaya

khule jo lab uske jaise pamkhuri kamal ki
dil mein pyaar ka rang chhaa ke gulaabi kar gaya

woh hai ek chamakta hua sa mahtaab ya koi kiran
uske aane se yah jeevan mera khil ke saat rango mein dhla gaya !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2007, 03:25:11 PM »
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bahoot hi khubsoorat likha hai ranju ji!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2007, 08:12:14 AM »
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shurkiya pooja ....aapne nahi likha kuch ?
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