kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai:Miscellaneous Shayri

kaushikbhawna008

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kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai
jaha mei na khud hoon aur na mera saya hai

yahan dur sehra mei hai nahi koi ajnabi b
bas dur talak gamo ki hain parchaiyaan

khatam silsial khato aur dil ki dhadkan ka yaadon se
har roz ek aur dard ka manzar chaya hai

kise dekhu piche mudkar kaun lautkar aayega
khatam ho gaya hai intzaar b sadiyon se jo laut kar na aya hai

likhu kuch b likha ab jaata nahi lavfz ab kalam ko milte nahi
bas yu lage jaise dard b kuch ghabraya kuch thar.raya hai

"bhawna" aaj udaas bohut hai par aankho mei koi nami nahi
bas dil mei hai sawal yahi kya kahu mein usko jo apna hokar b apna nahi hai

waqt kyu khel raha hai hamse aankhmicholiyan
kyu mera fir waqt imthaan lene aaya hai


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k.shael

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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2008, 09:46:42 AM »

VERY NICE, Applause

KAUSHIK JI....
KEEP IT UP,
BY. K.SHAEL

JANE WAQT KYA IMTIHAAN LENE AAYA HAI,
YA MERI BACCHI HUI JAAN LENE AAYA HAI,
MALOOM HAI KHUDA KO USSE DOOR HONE KE BAAD
KI HALAT,PHIR BHI AAJ MERE PYAR KO KISI AUR
KE SAATH PYAR KARNE, KA NAYA DARD DIKHANE LAYA
HAI,WO MERE SAMNE HO GAYA KISI AUR KA ZINDAGI
TUNE ITNA BHAYANAK MOD KYUN DIKHAYA HAI....


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2008, 09:57:19 AM »

thanx shally

na jaane kab ye khatam imthaan hoga
kab mera pura intzaar hoga
dil ne dekhe hain sada khawab jiske
na jaane kab wo pura har khwab hoga


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Sammual

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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2008, 08:38:24 PM »

Good Job bhawna ji
Nice reply shally ji


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syednaami

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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2008, 08:41:27 PM »

A very touching poetry,,, beautifully written and nice wording...


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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2008, 11:40:59 AM »

"bhawna" aaj udaas bohut hai par aankho mei koi nami nahi
bas dil mei hai sawal yahi kya kahu mein usko jo apna hokar b apna nahi hai

bahut bahut khoob bhawnaji..bahut ache..
yeh line to bahut khoobsurat likhi hai aapne..


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2008, 06:40:52 AM »

thnx khwahish ji, sammual ji and syednaami ji


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syednaami

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Re: kis mod par khuda lekar hamei aaya hai

«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2008, 09:54:23 PM »

Aap ka dhanyavaad Kaushik jee...


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