Kis tarah ka pyar karta hai

by Pooja on December 18, 2008, 10:34:35 PM
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«Reply #195 on: January 21, 2009, 05:44:13 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 21, 2009, 05:41:13 PM
Apne wo he likha jo apke dil ne kaha... mujhe bahoot acha laga.. sorry kyun...maine bhi to aise he shabd likhe hai... uske jawab main apne wais jawab diya... I really like it!!



ohh shukriya Pooja jee ke apko pasand aya...hume toh aadat hai kadva aur dukh bhara likhne ki...i liked it that u appreciated wat i rote..hopefully the next time sumone writes the reply will be better...
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«Reply #196 on: January 21, 2009, 05:52:34 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 21, 2009, 05:44:13 PM


ohh shukriya Pooja jee ke apko pasand aya...hume toh aadat hai kadva aur dukh bhara likhne ki...i liked it that u appreciated wat i rote..hopefully the next time sumone writes the reply will be better...


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«Reply #197 on: January 22, 2009, 02:07:55 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 21, 2009, 05:04:36 PM
Janati hi Pank ji, bahoot dino se pending tha.... magar bahooot jayada busy ho gai hu... ajj jaladio main kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai

Jhooth jhooth aor bas jhooth ka naam hai
Kyun nahi mujhko tujh per aitbaar hai

Chor di thi sari dunia bas ek tere liye
Kaise phir bewafai ajj teri pehchan hai

Tumhare lubo per muhobbat ka shabd
Danav ke hath main jaise phasi chriya ki pukar hai

Na naam le mere dard ka apni juban se
Janati hu apne mard hone ka jo tujhe guman hai

Ruthi nahi, torr torr kar masali gai hu main
Afsos ka shabd, wah kaya teri juban hai

Na kar kisi bhi sawere ki baat ajj tu mujhse
Tere pass, mere liye,  sirf andhiari raat hai….


Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Aapke liye reply dene ki koshish kar raha hun


Nahi hai koi shikayat tujhse,
                In labo se har ilzam ab manzur hai,
Bewafai ka dard bhool jaye shayad,
                Lekin dard-e-zakhm aankho me jarur hai...
Dil ki gehrayi se karo nafrat mujhse,
                Nafraton ki inteha shayad abhi dur hai...
Apni har khata pe tujhse ilzam paye maine,
                Ehsas hai mujhe teri khushiyon ka mausam kitna majboor hai...
~Pank~
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«Reply #198 on: January 22, 2009, 02:23:13 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 21, 2009, 05:17:21 PM


wah wah wah wah!!!!


arey tujse pyar karke waise bhi pachta raha hoon,
mujhe tera diya hua savera nahin chahiye...

gamand hai mujhe par iss bat ka ke maine sacha pyaar kia tha,
arey tere diye hue bewaffai ke daag mujhe nahin chahiye...

tujhe masalne ke liye hi khuda ne mujhe duniya main bheja tha,
tu mere liye duniya chod de;aisa guneghar boj mujhe nahin chahiye...

ager main ek bewaffa hoon toh tu bhi kuch kam nahin hai,
acha hua nahin dia pyaar tune kyun ke tera diya hua napak pyaar mujhe nahin chahiye...
Nice One Rahim Miya
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Reply dene ka dil kiya toh likh liya,
itna achha toh nahi likha hai but koshish jarur kar raha hun...

Dil ke rishton pe koi ilzam nahi hota,
Khwahishe to aazad hoti hain, unpe bandisho ka koi kaam nahi hota...

Ekraar ho mohabbt ka,ya ilzamo ki raat ho...
          Ishq ke parvane ko aur kya chahiye,itna hi bs hai ki uske baad bhi uski baat ho...

Hosh hote nahi kayam jab bhi ilzamo ka safar dekhte hain,
          Uske dard ko ab toh is zindagi me sham-o-sehar dekhate hain...

~Pank~
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«Reply #199 on: January 22, 2009, 05:17:38 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 22, 2009, 02:07:55 AM
Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Aapke liye reply dene ki koshish kar raha hun


Nahi hai koi shikayat tujhse,
                In labo se har ilzam ab manzur hai,
Bewafai ka dard bhool jaye shayad,
                Lekin dard-e-zakhm aankho me jarur hai...
Dil ki gehrayi se karo nafrat mujhse,
                Nafraton ki inteha shayad abhi dur hai...
Apni har khata pe tujhse ilzam paye maine,
                Ehsas hai mujhe teri khushiyon ka mausam kitna majboor hai...
~Pank~






wah wah wah wah...janab bahaut hi khoob...bahaut acha likha hai apne...
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«Reply #200 on: January 22, 2009, 05:29:19 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 22, 2009, 02:23:13 AM
Nice One Rahim Miya
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Reply dene ka dil kiya toh likh liya,
itna achha toh nahi likha hai but koshish jarur kar raha hun...

Dil ke rishton pe koi ilzam nahi hota,
Khwahishe to aazad hoti hain, unpe bandisho ka koi kaam nahi hota...

Ekraar ho mohabbt ka,ya ilzamko ki raat ho...
          Ishq ke parvane ko aur kya chahiye,itna hi bs hai ki uske baad bhi uski baat ho...

Hosh hote nahi kayam jab bhi ilzamo ka safar dekhte hain,
          Uske dard ko ab toh is zindagi me sham-o-sehar dekhate hain...

~Pank~



wah wah wah wah Pank jee...bahaut khoob...apne bahaut acha likha hai yaar
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«Reply #201 on: January 22, 2009, 05:40:43 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 22, 2009, 02:07:55 AM
Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Aapke liye reply dene ki koshish kar raha hun


Nahi hai koi shikayat tujhse,
                In labo se har ilzam ab manzur hai,
Bewafai ka dard bhool jaye shayad,
                Lekin dard-e-zakhm aankho me jarur hai...
Dil ki gehrayi se karo nafrat mujhse,
                Nafraton ki inteha shayad abhi dur hai...
Apni har khata pe tujhse ilzam paye maine,
                Ehsas hai mujhe teri khushiyon ka mausam kitna majboor hai...
~Pank~





apka jawab dene ki koshish kar raha hoon..umeed hai acha hoga...



ab tu ilzam kabul karne ke ilava kar hi kya sakta hai,
deke bewaffai ka zeher tu gangajal tho di pila sakta hai...

teri ankhon main toh nafrat ke kante hone chahiye,
deke ansu kisi ko tu ab khushi tho di mang sakta hai...

tujse nafrat karun main yeh bhi mere liye ek gunaah hai,
pee ke kisi ka khoon ab tu sirf ansu tho di mang sakta hai...

mausam toh ab ayega teri barbadion ka,
utha kar toofan meri zindagi main tu ab tere liye barsaat tho di mang sakta hai...
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«Reply #202 on: January 22, 2009, 06:08:49 AM »
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tere jaise guneghar se main baat karun toh yeh ek gunah hoga,
tere saath baith ke khana bhi khaun toh woh bhi napak hoga...




maaf kijiyega sirf do lines hi likh paa raha hoon...jab agli baar aunga toh zada likh ke jaunga...
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«Reply #203 on: January 22, 2009, 03:08:22 PM »
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bahoot khoob likha hai sabhi doston ne......
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«Reply #204 on: January 22, 2009, 04:14:10 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 22, 2009, 03:08:22 PM
bahoot khoob likha hai sabhi doston ne......

shukriya
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«Reply #205 on: January 31, 2009, 01:23:56 PM »
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Ek shaandaar HAAR me moti piroti se ye lino k javaab me lines....Mubarak ho...Pankji...D H JI....Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
 Kabhi padha tha Nafrat ki inteha pe pyarr ki utpatti hoti hai...
Quote from: pankshivam on January 22, 2009, 02:07:55 AM
Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Aapke liye reply dene ki koshish kar raha hun


Nahi hai koi shikayat tujhse,
                In labo se har ilzam ab manzur hai,
Bewafai ka dard bhool jaye shayad,
                Lekin dard-e-zakhm aankho me jarur hai...
Dil ki gehrayi se karo nafrat mujhse,
                Nafraton ki inteha shayad abhi dur hai...
Apni har khata pe tujhse ilzam paye maine,
                Ehsas hai mujhe teri khushiyon ka mausam kitna majboor hai...
~Pank~
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«Reply #206 on: January 31, 2009, 01:35:42 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 31, 2009, 01:23:56 PM
Ek shaandaar HAAR me moti piroti se ye lino k javaab me lines....Mubarak ho...Pankji...D H JI....Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
 Kabhi padha tha Nafrat ki inteha pe pyarr ki utpatti hoti hai...
Shukriya Smardiyaji
Sahi kaha Aapne

Nafrat ki inteha pe muhabbat jise hoti hai...
Use bevafa kehne pe bhewafayi bhi fut-fut kar roti hai...

Mangata hai dil har baar khushiya kisi ki khatir,
Fir chahe zindagi, har lamhe me ashko ke mooti piroti hai...
~Pank~
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«Reply #207 on: January 31, 2009, 08:14:47 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 31, 2009, 01:35:42 PM
Shukriya Smardiyaji
Sahi kaha Aapne

Nafrat ki inteha pe muhabbat jise hoti hai...
Use bevafa kehne pe bhewafayi bhi fut-fut kar roti hai...

Mangata hai dil har baar khushiya kisi ki khatir,
Fir chahe zindagi, har lamhe me ashko ke mooti piroti hai...
~Pank~



bahaut khoob Pank jee...maza agaya mere bhai...especially first two lines...amazing...

karke mujse bewaffai mujhe bewaffa bulate ho,
karte ho mujse pyar ka izhar phir bhi mujhe chodd ke chale jate ho,
bewaffai ko toh rona hi hoga kyun ki kale hai apke sare ilzam,
chum ke humare labon ko kisi aur se dil lagate ho...
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«Reply #208 on: January 31, 2009, 09:36:24 PM »
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Nice one Shivam Ji
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«Reply #209 on: February 04, 2009, 06:06:38 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Good work Shivam
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