kisi aur ko ab kidhar dekhta hun.......mann

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Kisi aur ko ab kidhar dekhta hun.
Tum hi tum ho dikhte jidhar dekhta hun.

Mere dil pe tab lot jate hain sanp,
Tumhari jo tirachhi nazar dekhta hun.

Tumhari bhi ankhen chamkne lagin hain,
Muhabbat ka pani asar dekhta hun.

Paar utarunga ya doob jaunga ab,
Samndar main gahare utar dekhta hun.

mann

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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2012, 09:58:51 AM »
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badiya hai Mann Ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2012, 10:03:39 AM »
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Kisi aur ko ab kidhar dekhta hun.
Tum hi tum ho dikhte jidhar dekhta hun.

Mere dil pe tab lot jate hain sanp,
Tumhari jo tirachhi nazar dekhta hun.

Tumhari bhi ankhen chamkne lagin hain,
Muhabbat ka pani asar dekhta hun.

Paar utarunga ya doob jaunga ab,
Samndar main gahare utar dekhta hun.

mann




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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2012, 10:14:39 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 11:00:31 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 11:27:56 AM »
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Kisi aur ko ab kidhar dekhta hun.
Tum hi tum ho dikhte jidhar dekhta hun.

Mere dil pe tab lot jate hain sanp,
Tumhari jo tirachhi nazar dekhta hun.

Tumhari bhi ankhen chamkne lagin hain,
Muhabbat ka pani asar dekhta hun.

Paar utarunga ya doob jaunga ab,
Samndar main gahare utar dekhta hun.

mann


Bahut khoob mann ji bahut jyada gahre utarne ki jaroorat nahi..

daad qabool kariye.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 11:41:41 AM »
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bahut dhanyawad amitji
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2012, 11:42:20 AM »
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Bahut barhiyaa Mann jee

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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2012, 09:22:58 PM »
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