KISI BEHWAFA SE PYAR [Asghr]

by Asghr on January 24, 2009, 09:47:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 08, 2009, 06:14:34 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 07:39:37 PM
Asghr ji, Meri adat hai aoro ki shayri parr kar uski kuch lines ke arth ko laker jawab main likhna,  apki Kavita apne app main itani puran hoti hai ki uske sath likhne main yah dar rahta hai ki kahin meri lines apki kavita ke arth na kam kar de..

Bewafa se pyar karne ko teri yaadein hai kaafi
dil ko tadpaane ko teri baatein hai kaafi

Ab kaya kisi se hum koi wada karege
Her bewafa main tera chehra dekh lena hai kaafi..



wah wah wah, very nice

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«Reply #16 on: February 08, 2009, 06:17:31 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 08, 2009, 06:10:59 PM

wah wah Pooja jee...bahaut khoob!!!


tujhe meri baatein tadpaengi,
aram aram se tujhe rulaengi,
pyar bhare ansu mere tere dil ko jalaenge,
aur aise hi tu pyaar se marjaegi...

inn 4 lines ek dil ki baat chupi hai...lines ka rhyming bhool matlab samajiyega...



wah wah , kya baat hai DH.. bahut khoob kaha aap neh


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«Reply #17 on: February 08, 2009, 11:39:10 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 08, 2009, 06:10:59 PM

wah wah Pooja jee...bahaut khoob!!!


tujhe meri baatein tadpaengi,
aram aram se tujhe rulaengi,
pyar bhare ansu mere tere dil ko jalaenge,
aur aise hi tu pyaar se marjaegi...

inn 4 lines ek dil ki baat chupi hai...lines ka rhyming bhool matlab samajiyega...



wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #18 on: February 08, 2009, 11:39:35 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: February 09, 2009, 12:17:08 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Asghr Sahab
Rahim Achha Likha Dost
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«Reply #20 on: February 09, 2009, 12:17:32 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 07:39:37 PM
Asghr ji, Meri adat hai aoro ki shayri parr kar uski kuch lines ke arth ko laker jawab main likhna,  apki Kavita apne app main itani puran hoti hai ki uske sath likhne main yah dar rahta hai ki kahin meri lines apki kavita ke arth na kam kar de..

Bewafa se pyar karne ko teri yaadein hai kaafi
dil ko tadpaane ko teri baatein hai kaafi

Ab kaya kisi se hum koi wada karege
Her bewafa main tera chehra dekh lena hai kaafi..


Bahoot Khoob Poojaji
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«Reply #21 on: February 09, 2009, 12:24:35 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Jasbir ji
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 24, 2009, 09:51:45 PM
wah Asghr ... kya baat hai

CHALO EK BAAR FIR MOHABBAT KAR LETE HAI
KISI BEWAFA SEY PYAR KAR LETE HAI
TOOTEY DIL KOH EK BAAR FIR JOAD LETEY HAI
KUCH PAL KEY LIYE HI SAHI,KUCH JINDAGI AUR JI LETE HAI



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«Reply #22 on: February 09, 2009, 12:24:57 AM »
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shukaria Pank ji
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«Reply #23 on: February 09, 2009, 12:31:18 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 09, 2009, 12:24:57 AM
shukaria Pank ji
Always Welcome Poojaji Hats off to you!
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«Reply #24 on: February 09, 2009, 12:47:06 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 09, 2009, 12:17:08 AM
Bahoot Khoob Asghr Sahab
Rahim Achha Likha Dost

aap ka shukriya Pnkshivam ji.asghr
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«Reply #25 on: February 09, 2009, 12:56:29 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 07:39:37 PM
Asghr ji, Meri adat hai aoro ki shayri parr kar uski kuch lines ke arth ko laker jawab main likhna,  apki Kavita apne app main itani puran hoti hai ki uske sath likhne main yah dar rahta hai ki kahin meri lines apki kavita ke arth na kam kar de..

Bewafa se pyar karne ko teri yaadein hai kaafi
dil ko tadpaane ko teri baatein hai kaafi

Ab kaya kisi se hum koi wada karege
Her bewafa main tera chehra dekh lena hai kaafi..


Pooja ji hum jaise laug chirag le k b dhondo tau nahin milte,meri yeh baat jokes k thread main na baij dena.asghr
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«Reply #26 on: February 09, 2009, 01:01:46 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 09, 2009, 12:56:29 AM
Pooja ji hum jaise laug chirag le k b dhondo tau nahin milte,meri yeh baat jokes k thread main na baij dena.asghr

pahle apni baat ka arth mujhe to samjha de app  DOH DOH
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«Reply #27 on: February 09, 2009, 01:32:24 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 09, 2009, 01:01:46 AM
pahle apni baat ka arth mujhe to samjha de app  DOH DOH
yehni, main ne socha aap yeh na keh dain k aik dhondo to dozen milte hain.asghr
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«Reply #28 on: March 20, 2009, 05:21:44 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 09, 2009, 12:24:35 AM
Bahoot Khoob Jasbir ji

thanks Pank

Jasbir Singh
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