~*~ Kismat bahaut kadki hai ~*~by Rahim

by dead heart on August 08, 2011, 04:51:54 AM
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Kal raat doston kay saath bahar jana hua..Order dete hue, ek dost ne yunhi kehdia 'sambhal kay order dena, kismat bahaut kadki hai..' Aur maine kaha,
'Kismat main humari bahaut kadki hai,
Humare paas na paisa hai, na ladki hai..'

Bas toh socha kuch yunhi free verse likha jaye..

Kismat main humari bahaut kadki hai,
Humare paas na paisa hai na ladki hai..

Main itna najane tanha kyun hoon,
Dil main rehne se tere main mana kyun hoon,
Wafadar ghumon se hi toh sajhi hai zindagi,
Sach kehta hoon bahaut tadpi hai zindagi,
Kabhi humari ankhon main palte khwab toote,
Toh kabhi kisi ne dil main jagte armaan loote,
Wakei kismat main humari bahaut kadki hai,
Humare paas na paisa hai, na ladki hai..

Paisa dastaak dejaye toh ladki miljaegi,
Warna kisi kadke se kaun dil lagaegi,
Aj kal paisa mohobat se upar hai,
Jaise kayi logon kay liye ashiq Khuda se upar hai,
Inn duniya walon ko najane kab akal ani hai,
Sach kehta hoon, ek dinn inhe moun ki khani hai,
Wakei kismat main humari bahaut kadki hai,
Humare paas na paisa hai, na ladki hai..

Dollar shollar dikha kay apna kaam nikalwana,
Qabr main jaa kay kis ko hai paise khilwana,
Jab tak ho duniya main bas sawab kamana,
Warna baad main toh hai sirf pachtana,
Mohobat ne seekhaya mujhe ‘Khamosh’ dil na lagana,
Bewaffai pane se behtar hai tanha waqt beetana,
Waqei kismat main humari bahaut kadki hai,
Humare paas na paisa hai, na ladki hai..

Kismat main humari bahaut kadki hai,
Humare paas na paisa hai na ladki hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2011, 05:25:55 AM »
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wese to aapki post achhi hai--

lekin mujhe ye theame kuch jada pasanad nai aaya--

paisa aur ladki ko hi kimat mana gaya hai isme--

agar Majahiya shayri hai to bahut saari daad iss post ko Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2011, 09:41:21 AM »
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Bahut achhe... Rahim Bhai... Usual Smile Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2011, 11:57:57 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 08, 2011, 05:25:55 AM
wese to aapki post achhi hai--

lekin mujhe ye theame kuch jada pasanad nai aaya--

paisa aur ladki ko hi kimat mana gaya hai isme--

agar Majahiya shayri hai to bahut saari daad iss post ko Usual Smile
Teh teh dil se shukriya..
Ladki aur kadki rhyme karte hai isiliye yeh iss post ki lines hai..
Haan ek mazakiya post keh sakte hai isse..light post..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2011, 12:00:17 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 08, 2011, 09:41:21 AM
Bahut achhe... Rahim Bhai... Usual Smile Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya Mohammad jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2011, 01:08:39 PM »
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bahut khoob Rahim ji.
as usual aapki poetry different aur thematic hoti hai.
iss tarha likhte rahen.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2011, 04:07:24 PM »
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bht bht khoob rahim....
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2011, 06:16:07 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab bade dino baad aapki haazri huyi mehfil meiN..
Janab aajkal masrufiyat jyaada hai kia ?

Khair par bahut khub kalaam kahi hai aapne.. behad
achche aur umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... Usual Smile
Sachai hai ahsaas O khayaal meiN .. Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2011, 12:56:19 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 08, 2011, 01:08:39 PM
bahut khoob Rahim ji.
as usual aapki poetry different aur thematic hoti hai.
iss tarha likhte rahen.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Suresh jee..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2011, 12:56:47 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on August 08, 2011, 04:07:24 PM
bht bht khoob rahim....
Shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2011, 12:58:07 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 08, 2011, 06:16:07 PM
Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab bade dino baad aapki haazri huyi mehfil meiN..
Janab aajkal masrufiyat jyaada hai kia ?

Khair par bahut khub kalaam kahi hai aapne.. behad
achche aur umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... Usual Smile
Sachai hai ahsaas O khayaal meiN .. Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

Parwaaz jee,
Apka comment dil khush kar deta hai..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Bas aj kal likhna bahaut kam hota hai..
Masroof toh haan hai hi..
Apne waqt diya, apka shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2011, 01:12:44 PM »
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Bhai Rahim,Aapne Jaisa Intro diya ke doston ke saath baithe-baithe aapsi baatcheet mein aapko yeh line sujhi aur aapne iss par ek nazm hi likdi..Aisa kayi baar hota hai ke koi line itni achi lagti hai ke Dil Kehta Hai Ke Kyon Naa Kuch Likha jaaye...Light Mood Mein Likhi Yeh Nazm Dichasp Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: khwaish on August 09, 2011, 01:12:44 PM
Bhai Rahim,Aapne Jaisa Intro diya ke doston ke saath baithe-baithe aapsi baatcheet mein aapko yeh line sujhi aur aapne iss par ek nazm hi likdi..Aisa kayi baar hota hai ke koi line itni achi lagti hai ke Dil Kehta Hai Ke Kyon Naa Kuch Likha jaaye...Light Mood Mein Likhi Yeh Nazm Dichasp Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Teh teh dil se shukriya Dost..
Haan yeh line yunhi keh di thi aur ussi waqt socha tha,
kay fursat main ispe zaroor likhunga..
Khush rahiye..!
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