kissa na koi afsaana !!!

by sarfira on December 22, 2011, 07:07:49 PM
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haal-e-dil me kabhi utar ke dekh
meri raahoN se jara guzar ke dekh--
kissa na koi afsaana hai ye
muflis panahon me basar ke dekh--
kya hai, ye manzar-e-ranjish ye julmo sitam
masoom nigaahon me sajar ke dekh--
kasar hai baaki asar hai baaki
duaon me palak bhigo ke dekh--
!!
!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 07:12:50 PM »
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good said sarfira ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2011, 09:04:20 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on December 22, 2011, 07:07:49 PM
haal-e-dil me kabhi utar ke dekh
meri raahoN se jara guzar ke dekh--
kissa na koi afsaana hai ye
muflis panahon me basar ke dekh--
kya hai, ye manzar-e-ranjish ye julmo sitam
masoom nigaahon me sajar ke dekh--
kasar hai baaki asar hai baaki
duaon me palak bhigo ke dekh--
!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Kiaa Baat hai, sahab, kiaa baat hai
"Duaon me palak bhigo ke dekh," Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Bahut khoob, behad pyari jumle ki adayi
pure ashar dad ke khabil ...

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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2011, 02:33:20 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sarfira ji
nice one.
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2011, 04:16:13 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause waah waah sarfira ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2011, 12:24:12 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on December 22, 2011, 07:07:49 PM
haal-e-dil me kabhi utar ke dekh
meri raahoN se jara guzar ke dekh--
kissa na koi afsaana hai ye
muflis panahon me basar ke dekh--
kya hai, ye manzar-e-ranjish ye julmo sitam
masoom nigaahon me sajar ke dekh--
kasar hai baaki asar hai baaki
duaon me palak bhigo ke dekh--
!!
!!

ehsaas acha hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2012, 04:29:44 AM »
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Quote from: injured.warrior on December 22, 2011, 07:12:50 PM
good said sarfira ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanq--
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2012, 04:32:24 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on December 22, 2011, 09:04:20 PM
Kiaa Baat hai, sahab, kiaa baat hai
"Duaon me palak bhigo ke dekh," Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Bahut khoob, behad pyari jumle ki adayi
pure ashar dad ke khabil ...

Abul Asad
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aajkal aap nazar nahi aa rhe bazm me
kahan hain aap?
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Quote from: mkv on December 23, 2011, 02:33:20 AM
Bahut khoob Sarfira ji
nice one.
thanq janaab
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 23, 2011, 04:16:13 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause waah waah sarfira ji bahut khoob
meri adna si kosis ko pasand krne ke lie bht bht sukriya
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 25, 2011, 12:24:12 PM
ehsaas acha hai
bas janaab ehsaas hi h jo kbi kb likhwa daalte hain mujhse wrna shabd to hai hi nhi mere paas

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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 25, 2011, 12:24:12 PM
ehsaas acha hai
bas janaab ehsaas hi h jo kbi kb likhwa daalte hain mujhse wrna shabd to hai hi nhi mere paas

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