kitnaa sailaab hai mere andar................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on June 17, 2011, 05:48:12 PM
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naa mai jaltee hooN naa to bujhtee hooN
bheegee lakdee se mai sulagtee hooN

band kamre me band hawaa kee tarah
baahar aane ko mai tarastee hooN

ye ghutan ye chubhan sahooN kaise
sard aaheN hee bas mai bhartee hooN

lapke shole hawaa bhee tundkhoo hai
khushq aaNkhoN me khwaab bhartee hooN

humqadam ban ke saath ho phir bhee
kyuN mai tanhaaiyoN me ghirtee hooN

shams e umeed to nikaltaa nahee
teergee se abas mai ladtee hoon

kitnaa sailaab hai mere andar
bah naa jaaye jahaaN mai dartee hooN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2011, 06:40:59 PM »
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Antar Dwandh Ko Bahut Khoobi Se Aapne Darshaayaa ... Apni Iss Ghazal MeN ... Mamta Ji ! Har Ashaar Dil Ki Gehraai MeN Samaa Gayaa ... Khaas Kar Yeh Sher Bahut Aasar ChhoDh Gayaa  ...

band kamre me band hawaa kee tarah
baahar aane ko mai tarastee hooN

Tahe Dil Se Mubaaraqbaad Aur DheroN Daad Qubuul KareN ... ! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Aise hi umdaa KalaamoN Ke Saath Aati Rahen .. Likhti RaheN Aage Bhi ... ! Khush Rahen ... !

DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2011, 06:59:57 PM »
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wah mamta ji…
kaafi umda ehsaas die aapne…
alfaaz bhi khub rhen aur bayani bhi…
thoda aur better kar skti thi aap…
iss umda soch aur ajeeb si uljhan darshati ghazal ko hajaron dad…
khus rahen
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2011, 01:14:59 AM »
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ye dil hai hi aisa. bahut kuch chahta hai badle me.par vo na mile to ....
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2011, 09:28:04 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Mamtaji...

Aapki Yeh Ghazal Bahut Kuch keh Gayi..

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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2011, 09:41:29 AM »
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bahut khoob mamta ji.
ye shayad 95% logo ki bhawana hogi.
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2011, 05:44:22 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Achchhee ghazal hai, ye bhee..
matle se maqte tak dard hee
dard hai...

Ek matla kaha tha..woh yaad aa gaya..
ghazal pooree naheen ho paayee..

"jitna peesaa hai utna rachtee hai
 woH to mehaNdee hai woH mahaktee hai"

Dili daad qubool karen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2011, 06:43:44 PM »
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too good Mamta ji...kind of true felt emotions...keep the good work coming!
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«Reply #8 on: June 19, 2011, 07:22:28 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 17, 2011, 05:48:12 PM
naa mai jaltee hooN naa to bujhtee hooN
bheegee lakdee se mai sulagtee hooN

band kamre me band hawaa kee tarah
baahar aane ko mai tarastee hooN

ye ghutan ye chubhan sahooN kaise
sard aaheN hee bas mai bhartee hooN

lapke shole hawaa bhee tundkhoo hai
khushq aaNkhoN me khwaab bhartee hooN

humqadam ban ke saath ho phir bhee
kyuN mai tanhaaiyoN me ghirtee hooN

shams e umeed to nikaltaa nahee
teergee se abas mai ladtee hoon

kitnaa sailaab hai mere andar
bah naa jaaye jahaaN mai dartee hooN

Mamta Bajpai






bahut khoob M.B  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2011, 09:44:01 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 17, 2011, 05:48:12 PM
naa mai jaltee hooN naa to bujhtee hooN
bheegee lakdee se mai sulagtee hooN

band kamre me band hawaa kee tarah
baahar aane ko mai tarastee hooN

ye ghutan ye chubhan sahooN kaise
sard aaheN hee bas mai bhartee hooN

lapke shole hawaa bhee tundkhoo hai
khushq aaNkhoN me khwaab bhartee hooN

humqadam ban ke saath ho phir bhee
kyuN mai tanhaaiyoN me ghirtee hooN

shams e umeed to nikaltaa nahee
teergee se abas mai ladtee hoon

kitnaa sailaab hai mere andar
bah naa jaaye jahaaN mai dartee hooN

Mamta Bajpai

bahut khoob kya matla hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2011, 08:21:13 PM »
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Shukriyaa Adil jee!
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