kiyon maa,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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abhi kuch din pehle ekk maa baap ne apni bachi ko maar diya,,uske chote chote piss karke daba diya,bohat dukh hua jankar ..uss par kuch panktiya likh raha hoo,n,,dhiyaan dijiyega,,


kiyon  maa  tumne  eysaa  qahar  kamaayaa hai,
jeena tha mujhe  kiyon  kokh main mitaaya hai,

meri bhee hasratai,n  thee  kuch armaa,n they,
tode sare khuwaab mari  rooh koh tadpaaya hai,

bankar phool tere aangan koh chaar soo mehkti,
todd kar apnee daal sey  mujhe  murjhaaya hai,

ho agla janam bete key roop main yahi dua hai,
beti hoo,n is baatka tumne ehsaas karaaya hai,

beta ghar baant taa  main dukh bant tee tumara,
karke bharun hatiya naari ko kalnk lagaaya hai,

sunkar dil dehl gaya roo pada tha dil jeet kaa,
kaat kar har hisse koh mitti main  dabaaya hai,
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2015, 09:54:16 AM »
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Awesome lines Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2015, 01:14:47 PM »
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Bohat shukriya durga ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2015, 06:26:05 PM »
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Bahot achha likha hai aapne!
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2015, 07:57:01 PM »
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Very nice bro....
Par kya hua tha ...jo usne apni beti ko  itni baherahemi se Mar diya....
Can u plz tell me bro
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2015, 07:14:18 AM »
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so meloncholic n heartfelt lines...beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2015, 11:18:47 AM »
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bohat shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2015, 11:19:50 AM »
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bohat shukriya shikha dee,,
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2015, 11:21:04 AM »
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bohat shukriya sheetal ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2015, 02:40:31 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2015, 07:56:38 AM »
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Bohat shukriya surinder sir ji daaadd or ray dil se qabool
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