~Koi apna na nikla~ by Rahim

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Insaan ager kabhi sabse zada lachar mehsoos karta hai toh woh tab hota hai jab woh bimar hota hai..Peechle kuch dino se tabyat ne mujhe dokha diya hai iss qadar kay bistar ne tham lia hai..Allah ka anginat shukar hai kay abhi atleast thek hoon mager fully fit nahin..

Khair,
pata nahin kya soch kar yeh lavz apne ap behte gaye..zindagi kay har lamhe se seekhna chahiye..aur kehte hai kay mushkilon main insaan woh seekta hai jo khushialion main nahin seekh sakta..toh bas kuch seekha hai inn guzre kuch dino main..

kuch jazbaton ko kalam se kagaz par uttar raha hoon..

dua karta hoon Allah sabko mehfooz rakhe..Ameen..!

Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla,
Lipat gaya bistar se toh koi dekhne mujhe apne ghar se na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Maa meri dinn raat bhagti rahi mere peeche,
Ek bhi lamha uska khud kay bare main sochne main na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Mera dard iss qadar tha kay papa bhi mere pareshan the,
Ek bhi lamha unka mujhe dekhe bina na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Jinse na thi umeed unhone tak pucha kay kya haal hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager uss Zalim ka mere liye apne phone se ek message tak na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Shayad usse galat samajta hoon main mager dikhati toh woh aisa hai,
Kay mano aise waqt uski zuban se mere liye ek shabd dua ka na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

‘Khamosh’ toh talabgar hai sabhi ki duaon ka iss daur main yaaron,
Mager aj janlia sachayi yeh bhi duniya ki,
Kay apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2010, 04:52:16 PM »
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Bhai Rahim....aaj aapki ye peshkash padh kar apne aap ko aaine me khada mehsus kiya maine...

kuch apne gunaah kuch apne karam yaad aagaye....
kuch kehne ki tadap ho rahi hai par shabd nahin mil rahe ya jazbaat pata nahin...par ye aapki baat sach hai...apne khuun apne maa paa k alawa duniya me kabhi koi apna nahin hota...apne bhai bahen chahe jaise bhi hon lekin bure waqt me wahi sath dete hain...kisi k liye bhi unhe kabhi na sataye koi..
apni ek zid k liye kyun unhe satate hain log.....

pata nahin kya kya likh gai..maaf karna.

bht hi khubsuart aur dil ko chhu jane wali nazm hai ye aapki ...bhtttttttt sari duaon aur pyaar k sath..k aap jaldi se thik ho jayen..
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2010, 04:57:45 PM »
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Anamika di,

Bahaut bahaut shukriya..Ap bilkul sach likh gayi..aisa laga jaise parrte hi apka dil jo kehta gaya wohi ap likti gayi,..bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya..

Duaon aur pyaar apke liye di..!
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2010, 09:00:28 PM »
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Rahim bhai ky aho gya ji .... hru noe? wat happnd ... tht's y ur away from so many daz ...

Bhut khoob likha hai aur bhut sacha likha hai ........ voh kehte hai na
"Apne to Apne hote hai " .......

Pls app apna khyal rekhna & pls update me on ur health .. im worrid......

Yaar saab aise nahi hote hai bt its ok ......

TC pls
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2010, 11:42:41 AM »
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Shukriya Neel jee..
Dont be worried..Im fyn nw..mashAllah..
Shukriya once again.,!
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2010, 11:46:58 AM »
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are yaar hadd ho gayiii..apna mano to sahi ham kaun se paraye he~


sath khada tha mere khuda har raah meri
or me duniya se keheta raha koi apna na mila~
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2010, 11:49:13 AM »
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Arey humne kab kaha ap paraye hai..

apne do lines bahaut khoob likhi hai..! Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2010, 11:52:44 AM »
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shuk-riya dost...labz to hote hi behene ke liye he~
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2010, 02:40:12 PM »
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Kya Kahoon Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut dard Aur Gehre Jazbaat se Bhari peshkash Dil ko chuti hai, Sirf tabiyat Kharaab Hone Par Hi nahi,Insaan Aise Kayi halaaton se Guzarta Hai Jab usse yeh mehsoos hota hai ke ke Apna Khoon Apna Hi hota Hai..

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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2010, 02:42:34 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 28, 2010, 04:52:16 PM
Bhai Rahim....aaj aapki ye peshkash padh kar apne aap ko aaine me khada mehsus kiya maine...

kuch apne gunaah kuch apne karam yaad aagaye....
kuch kehne ki tadap ho rahi hai par shabd nahin mil rahe ya jazbaat pata nahin...par ye aapki baat sach hai...apne khuun apne maa paa k alawa duniya me kabhi koi apna nahin hota...apne bhai bahen chahe jaise bhi hon lekin bure waqt me wahi sath dete hain...kisi k liye bhi unhe kabhi na sataye koi..
apni ek zid k liye kyun unhe satate hain log.....

pata nahin kya kya likh gai..maaf karna.

bht hi khubsuart aur dil ko chhu jane wali nazm hai ye aapki ...bhtttttttt sari duaon aur pyaar k sath..k aap jaldi se thik ho jayen..


Anu Aapke baatein bilkul sach hai, haan sach kadwa zaroor hota hai,Par Aap sach se inkaar nahi kar sakte, chaahe apno mein bhi bahut khaamiyan ho par aakhir mein Rishte wahi nibhte hai.

bahut Achi Soch Thumbs UP
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Quote from: khwaish on September 29, 2010, 02:40:12 PM
Kya Kahoon Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut dard Aur Gehre Jazbaat se Bhari peshkash Dil ko chuti hai, Sirf tabiyat Kharaab Hone Par Hi nahi,Insaan Aise Kayi halaaton se Guzarta Hai Jab usse yeh mehsoos hota hai ke ke Apna Khoon Apna Hi hota Hai..

Lajawab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish Dost..bahaut sach kaha kay sirf bimari nahin, mushkil kay har daur main apne hi kam ate hai..apnon main bhi woh jo waqei sach main apna ho..
Teh dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2010, 05:25:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2010, 10:24:14 AM »
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Shukriya Hriday jee..!
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 28, 2010, 04:31:19 PM
Insaan ager kabhi sabse zada lachar mehsoos karta hai toh woh tab hota hai jab woh bimar hota hai..Peechle kuch dino se tabyat ne mujhe dokha diya hai iss qadar kay bistar ne tham lia hai..Allah ka anginat shukar hai kay abhi atleast thek hoon mager fully fit nahin..

Khair,
pata nahin kya soch kar yeh lavz apne ap behte gaye..zindagi kay har lamhe se seekhna chahiye..aur kehte hai kay mushkilon main insaan woh seekta hai jo khushialion main nahin seekh sakta..toh bas kuch seekha hai inn guzre kuch dino main..

kuch jazbaton ko kalam se kagaz par uttar raha hoon..

dua karta hoon Allah sabko mehfooz rakhe..Ameen..!

Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla,
Lipat gaya bistar se toh koi dekhne mujhe apne ghar se na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Maa meri dinn raat bhagti rahi mere peeche,
Ek bhi lamha uska khud kay bare main sochne main na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Mera dard iss qadar tha kay papa bhi mere pareshan the,
Ek bhi lamha unka mujhe dekhe bina na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Jinse na thi umeed unhone tak pucha kay kya haal hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager uss Zalim ka mere liye apne phone se ek message tak na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Shayad usse galat samajta hoon main mager dikhati toh woh aisa hai,
Kay mano aise waqt uski zuban se mere liye ek shabd dua ka na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

‘Khamosh’ toh talabgar hai sabhi ki duaon ka iss daur main yaaron,
Mager aj janlia sachayi yeh bhi duniya ki,
Kay apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent heart..~
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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2010, 11:00:26 AM »
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bAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI...Rahim-bhai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 28, 2010, 04:31:19 PM
Insaan ager kabhi sabse zada lachar mehsoos karta hai toh woh tab hota hai jab woh bimar hota hai..Peechle kuch dino se tabyat ne mujhe dokha diya hai iss qadar kay bistar ne tham lia hai..Allah ka anginat shukar hai kay abhi atleast thek hoon mager fully fit nahin..

Khair,
pata nahin kya soch kar yeh lavz apne ap behte gaye..zindagi kay har lamhe se seekhna chahiye..aur kehte hai kay mushkilon main insaan woh seekta hai jo khushialion main nahin seekh sakta..toh bas kuch seekha hai inn guzre kuch dino main..

kuch jazbaton ko kalam se kagaz par uttar raha hoon..

dua karta hoon Allah sabko mehfooz rakhe..Ameen..!

Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla,
Lipat gaya bistar se toh koi dekhne mujhe apne ghar se na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Maa meri dinn raat bhagti rahi mere peeche,
Ek bhi lamha uska khud kay bare main sochne main na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Mera dard iss qadar tha kay papa bhi mere pareshan the,
Ek bhi lamha unka mujhe dekhe bina na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Jinse na thi umeed unhone tak pucha kay kya haal hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager uss Zalim ka mere liye apne phone se ek message tak na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

Shayad usse galat samajta hoon main mager dikhati toh woh aisa hai,
Kay mano aise waqt uski zuban se mere liye ek shabd dua ka na nikla,
Apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

‘Khamosh’ toh talabgar hai sabhi ki duaon ka iss daur main yaaron,
Mager aj janlia sachayi yeh bhi duniya ki,
Kay apne khoon kay ilava koi apna na nikla..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent heart..~
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