koi dhoon banaate hai,,,,,,jeet jainam

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dil ki dhadkano se koi dhoon banaate hai,
murjhaaye phoolo ko  fir se khilaate hai,

apni takdeero ke khel ko soch samjhkar,
koi to behtreen tareeke ko aaj maate hai,,

woqt ne kisi ka hath na thaama hai kabhi,
chalo hum apni raftaar woqt se milaate hai,

zindagi bohut anmol hai eyse jaya na karo,
isey kaise jeena hai ye sabko sikhaate hai,

mere hatho ki lakeere mere kal ki dastaan,
kiya hoga na pata isey abse behter banaate hai,

hosla e buland karlo aaj sab milker ek sath,
aaj ek jutt hoker kisi ka gher mehkaate hai,

                     jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2014, 04:39:26 AM »
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Bahut umdah Jeet Sahib, dderon daad.
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2014, 05:26:59 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on June 22, 2014, 02:35:21 AM
dil ki dhadkano se koi dhoon banaate hai,
murjhaaye phoolo ko  fir se khilaate hai,
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apni takdeero ke khel ko soch samjhkar,
koi to behtreen tareeke ko aaj maate hai,,
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woqt ne kisi ka hath na thaama hai kabhi,
chalo hum apni raftaar woqt se milaate hai,
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zindagi bohut anmol hai eyse jaya na karo,
isey kaise jeena hai ye sabko sikhaate hai,
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mere hatho ki lakeere mere kal ki dastaan,
kiya hoga na pata isey abse behter banaate hai,
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
hosla e buland karlo aaj sab milker ek sath,
aaj ek jutt hoker kisi ka gher mehkaate hai,
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
                      jj saini
Waah waah,,,,,,,Bahut khoob Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2014, 01:04:12 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2014, 03:13:08 PM »
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