Koi Guzaarish na rahi --------------------------------------------PWFS

by pankajwfs on April 07, 2012, 01:49:30 PM
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Ab unki nigahoN me mere liye, wo kashis na rahi
QurbatoN me kaisi sargarmi, wo aatish na rahi.

Har Mausam har Sama khusgawar raha unke saath
Nazarey wahi haiN, wo nazar-e-aaraaish na rahi.

Ab bhi hai dum mere sine me gamoN ko jhelne ka,
Kya tere khanjar me wo Aab wo aajmaish na rahi.

InsaaN gar chahey to chum le mahtaab ki jabiN,
Wo jajbaat-e-purkashish kahan wo koshis na rahi.

Ek Saleeka Ek tehzeeb hua kiya unke ehtraam me,
Na wo Dour-e-bazm rahi koi uski numaish na rahi.

Gair koi dekhe tumhe to jal uthta tha dil mera,
Chalo aaraam mila dil ko, tumhe bandish na rahi.

Tum saath chalte the ye zamaana rashk karta raha,
Gam ab saath chalte haiN,ise ab Ranjish na rahi.

Tere khatoN ke sahare dariya-e-gam paar ho jata,
Jala ke unko aaya hun, ab koi gunzaaish na rahi.

Bahut hain vaar abhi baaki waqt-e-qaza ko karne,
Is patthar me na larzish ab koi khalish na rahi.

Jhukti rahi jabiN hazaroN khwaish liye 'Pankaj'.
Bandagi aisi ki humne ke koi guzaarish na rahi.

(PWFS - 07/04/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2012, 01:53:45 PM »
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Waah bhoot khoooob.
Hmari daad kaboool kijiye.
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2012, 02:04:06 PM »
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behtreen jadugari...hai likhavat ki.......daad kabool karen  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2012, 02:08:28 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on April 07, 2012, 01:49:30 PM
Ab unki nigahoN me mere liye, wo kashis na rahi
QurbatoN me kaisi sargarmi, wo aatish na rahi.

Har Mausam har Sama khusgawar raha unke saath
Nazarey wahi haiN, wo nazar-e-aaraaish na rahi.

Ab bhi hai dum mere sine me gamoN ko jhelne ka,
Kya tere khanjar me wo Aab wo aajmaish na rahi.

InsaaN gar chahey to chum le mahtaab ki jabiN,
Wo jajbaat-e-purkashish kahan wo koshis na rahi.

Ek Saleeka Ek tehzeeb hua kiya unke ehtraam me,
Na wo Dour-e-bazm rahi koi uski numaish na rahi.

Gair koi dekhe tumhe to jal uthta the dil mera,
Chalo aaraam mila dil ko, tumhe bandish na rahi.

Tum saath chalte the ye zamaana rashk karta raha,
Gam ab saath chalte haiN,ise ab Ranjish na rahi.

Tere khatoN ke sahare dariya-e-gam paar ho jata,
Jala ke unko aaya hun, ab koi gunzaaish na rahi.

Bahut hain vaar abhi baaki waqt-e-qaza ko karne,
Is patthar me na larzish ab koi khalish na rahi.

Jhukti rahi jabiN hazaroN khwaish liye 'Pankaj'.
Bandagi aisi ki humne ke koi guzaarish na rahi.

(PWFS - 07/04/2012)




Vakaai jaise Sanjeev Bhai Ne kaha Yeh lafzon Ki Jaadugari Hai..Aaj Subeh Se Bahut Se kalaam padhe..Par Iss Kalaam Ke Kya kehne..

Waaah Waaah Waaah!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Pankaj ji..

Bahutttttttt Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-E-Bayaan

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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2012, 03:07:43 PM »
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bahut sundar peshkash pankajji... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2012, 03:56:32 PM »
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waah waah pankaj ji badhaai aur daad
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2012, 04:29:52 PM »
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 Bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi aapne. Meri taraf se daad qabool karein.
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2012, 04:43:36 PM »
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Pankaj Ji
aapki tareef me bas itna hi kahunga..ki aapko bahut bahut door jaana hai..tamaam unchaaiyaan paani hai is safar me.
Bahut khoob..
Ab unki nigahoN me mere liye, wo kashis na rahi
QurbatoN me kaisi sargarmi, wo aatish na rahi. Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2012, 06:17:02 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on April 07, 2012, 01:49:30 PM
Ab unki nigahoN me mere liye, wo kashis na rahi
QurbatoN me kaisi sargarmi, wo aatish na rahi.

Har Mausam har Sama khusgawar raha unke saath
Nazarey wahi haiN, wo nazar-e-aaraaish na rahi.

Ab bhi hai dum mere sine me gamoN ko jhelne ka,
Kya tere khanjar me wo Aab wo aajmaish na rahi.

InsaaN gar chahey to chum le mahtaab ki jabiN,
Wo jajbaat-e-purkashish kahan wo koshis na rahi.

Ek Saleeka Ek tehzeeb hua kiya unke ehtraam me,
Na wo Dour-e-bazm rahi koi uski numaish na rahi.

Gair koi dekhe tumhe to jal uthta tha dil mera,
Chalo aaraam mila dil ko, tumhe bandish na rahi.

Tum saath chalte the ye zamaana rashk karta raha,
Gam ab saath chalte haiN,ise ab Ranjish na rahi.

Tere khatoN ke sahare dariya-e-gam paar ho jata,
Jala ke unko aaya hun, ab koi gunzaaish na rahi.

Bahut hain vaar abhi baaki waqt-e-qaza ko karne,
Is patthar me na larzish ab koi khalish na rahi.

Jhukti rahi jabiN hazaroN khwaish liye 'Pankaj'.
Bandagi aisi ki humne ke koi guzaarish na rahi.

(PWFS - 07/04/2012)


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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2012, 06:26:38 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on April 07, 2012, 01:49:30 PM
Ab unki nigahoN me mere liye, wo kashis na rahi
QurbatoN me kaisi sargarmi, wo aatish na rahi.

Har Mausam har Sama khusgawar raha unke saath
Nazarey wahi haiN, wo nazar-e-aaraaish na rahi.

Ab bhi hai dum mere sine me gamoN ko jhelne ka,
Kya tere khanjar me wo Aab wo aajmaish na rahi.

InsaaN gar chahey to chum le mahtaab ki jabiN,
Wo jajbaat-e-purkashish kahan wo koshis na rahi.

Ek Saleeka Ek tehzeeb hua kiya unke ehtraam me,
Na wo Dour-e-bazm rahi koi uski numaish na rahi.

Gair koi dekhe tumhe to jal uthta tha dil mera,
Chalo aaraam mila dil ko, tumhe bandish na rahi.

Tum saath chalte the ye zamaana rashk karta raha,
Gam ab saath chalte haiN,ise ab Ranjish na rahi.

Tere khatoN ke sahare dariya-e-gam paar ho jata,
Jala ke unko aaya hun, ab koi gunzaaish na rahi.

Bahut hain vaar abhi baaki waqt-e-qaza ko karne,
Is patthar me na larzish ab koi khalish na rahi.

Jhukti rahi jabiN hazaroN khwaish liye 'Pankaj'.
Bandagi aisi ki humne ke koi guzaarish na rahi.

(PWFS - 07/04/2012)
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2012, 01:44:07 AM »
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Quote from: Parvana shan on April 07, 2012, 01:53:45 PM
Waah bhoot khoooob.
Hmari daad kaboool kijiye.
Parvana ji post ko padhne aur sarahne ke liye apka bahut bahut sukriya.
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2012, 09:51:26 AM »
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Jabardast Jabardast......... i haveNo words to write......... but pankaj ji ajeeb sa jadoo kar gayi ye peshkash mujhme....... wakai maja aa gaya.......... Daad Daad..........
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2012, 11:18:50 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 07, 2012, 02:04:06 PM
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behtreen jadugari...hai likhavat ki.......daad kabool karen  Thumbs UP
Pehle to Is Kalaam ko apna kimti Samay dene  ke liye bahut bahut dhanyavaad.
Bas aap logon ki prerna ka hi sila hai apki duaoN ka asar hai mujh nacheez ko itni izaatafzaai mili hai.
Bahut bahut sukriya Sanjeeev ji aur Khwaish ji.
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Quote from: theyash on April 07, 2012, 03:07:43 PM
bahut sundar peshkash pankajji... Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanks yash ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2012, 02:55:28 AM »
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sirf yahi kiya ja sakta hai is nazm ke liye..........
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