koi taar aisa......

by poonamA on October 13, 2011, 03:13:06 AM
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koi taar aisa to chedo jahan me
jo bichde huo ko phir se mila de
dur bahot chanda, maa janti hai
par bete se kahti "tujhko dila de"
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2011, 06:39:51 AM »
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Quote from: poonamA on October 13, 2011, 03:13:06 AM
koi taar aisa to chedo jahan me
jo bichde huo ko phir se mila de
dur bahot chanda, maa janti hai
par bete se kahti "tujhko dila de"
bahot achi baat kahi Beta--
thanx for dis.

chanda ki baate aaj hui bemaani hain
RistoN me daraar bhi aani jaani hai
Maa kahti ye laal hai mera lekin
beto ne aaj ye baat bhi kahan maani hai
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khus raho
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2011, 10:21:48 AM »
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poonam Jee Aadaab!

Achcha khayaal kaha hai daad...
kafi achchi soch ko bayaaN karne ki
behad achchi koshish rahi aapki..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2011, 02:55:46 AM »
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thanx
Quote from: sarfira on October 13, 2011, 06:39:51 AM
bahot achi baat kahi Beta--
thanx for dis.

chanda ki baate aaj hui bemaani hain
RistoN me daraar bhi aani jaani hai
Maa kahti ye laal hai mera lekin
beto ne aaj ye baat bhi kahan maani hai
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khus raho
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2011, 02:56:25 AM »
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thanx parwaazji
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 13, 2011, 10:21:48 AM
poonam Jee Aadaab!

Achcha khayaal kaha hai daad...
kafi achchi soch ko bayaaN karne ki
behad achchi koshish rahi aapki..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2013, 02:21:41 AM »
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bahut achchha...likha...bachpan yaad aa gaya...
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2013, 03:06:55 PM »
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thx
Quote from: champak on March 30, 2013, 02:21:41 AM
bahut achchha...likha...bachpan yaad aa gaya...
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