koii(gul)

by gulzargul on September 15, 2008, 12:39:50 PM
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mun main phool khilaa tha koi
bheer main jab milaa tha koi

hogaya saket yakdam zamaana
aankhon main sehar chupaa tha koi

chaai kaali ghata barasny laga gulaab
hawa sy aanchal uraa tha koi

jhoom uthy rasty khushi main
iss adaa sy chalaa tha koi

chand chehra lab thy gulaab
gaal per til sajaa tha koi

pathar bany bot ki tarhaa
dekhny usko kharaa tha koi

rooh uter gai jism main jesy
berson baad jiyaa tha koi

kiun ban jaata hy khuaab aakhir
haqiqat jissy samjhaa tha koi
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2008, 01:11:54 PM »
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ye ghazl aap ky liye complete ki hy kanta ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2008, 02:14:26 PM »
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wah bhai gul ..bahoot umda likha aapne.....ab achchi koi baat hogi koi ghazal hogi to padhenge to hum bhi use aur sarahenge bhi...bhale hi wo aapne kanta ji ke kahne pe poori likhi ho...
fir se bahoot khoob
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2008, 02:19:56 PM »
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u r wellcome bekarar dost
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2008, 02:22:17 PM »
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where u
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2008, 02:57:10 PM »
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omg  notworthy gulzar mahashay kiya bat keh dali  Clapping Smiley

sachi mein mere liye, thanks thanks  Applause

antim 2 stanzas ka kiya kahu mein nishabd ho gai g.mahashay.
once again an intuitive poem for me.  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2008, 01:01:48 PM »
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kahaan ho tum kanta ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2008, 01:03:24 PM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on September 15, 2008, 12:39:50 PM
mun main phool khilaa tha koi
bheer main jab milaa tha koi

hogaya saket yakdam zamaana
aankhon main sehar chupaa tha koi

chaai kaali ghata barasny laga gulaab
hawa sy aanchal uraa tha koi

jhoom uthy rasty khushi main
iss adaa sy chalaa tha koi

chand chehra lab thy gulaab
gaal per til sajaa tha koi

pathar bany bot ki tarhaa
dekhny usko kharaa tha koi

rooh uter gai jism main jesy
berson baad jiyaa tha koi

kiun ban jaata hy khuaab aakhir
haqiqat jissy samjhaa tha koi

Bohot Khoob Gul Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2008, 06:20:48 AM »
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mein busy hu weekend hona he to time nikal pai nahi to abi university mein vayast hu.
tum kaha ho g.mahashay? thanks
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2008, 11:03:14 AM »
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ham na thy hamari kami mehsoos ki tum ny
shukr khuda ka itni inayet ki tum ny

kanta ji


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