*Kona Makan Ka*

by Roja on January 22, 2009, 03:16:56 PM
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Shabdon ko mat chabayiyega, Paan ki tarah
Inka prayog kijiye, kripan ki tarah..

Kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
Jaise mili ho mufth mein, anudan ki tarah..

Sab baat karo bandu..!!, siyasat ki math karo,
Jo ho gayi hai, deh ki dukaan ki tarah..

Beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
Babu huwa hai, faltu saman ki tarah..

Vaise toh tere shehar mein, suvidayein hai sabhi
Deti na maza gaon ke siwan ki tarah..

Acchi tarah pata, chale jana hai ek din,
Jeete hai her ek din ko hum, mehman ki tarah..
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2009, 03:31:21 PM »
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Waah Ji,.
Kya Khoob Hai,.
Nice One Roja Ji,.
Pardhkar Achcha Laga,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2009, 05:37:08 PM »
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Wah! Roja Ji
Bahut sundar peshkash hai
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2009, 06:57:37 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 22, 2009, 03:16:56 PM
Shabdon ko mat chabayiyega, Paan ki tarah
Inka prayog kijiye, kripan ki tarah..

Kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
Jaise mili ho mufth mein, anudan ki tarah..

Sab baat karo bandu..!!, siyasat ki math karo,
Jo ho gayi hai, deh ki dukaan ki tarah..

Beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
Babu huwa hai, faltu saman ki tarah..

Vaise toh tere shehar mein, suvidayein hai sabhi
Deti na maza gaon ke siwan ki tarah..

Acchi tarah pata, chale jana hai ek din,
Jeete hai her ek din ko hum, mehman ki tarah..

BAHOOT KHOOB ROJA JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2009, 07:35:57 AM »
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roja ji aap toh kamaal ka likhti ho......

shabdon ko mat chabayega, paan ki tarah,
shabdon mein ghera raaz hai, zindagi ki tarah.

kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
ki baap ne chura ke di ho kisiki, usko zindagi.

sab baat karo bandu..!!siyasat ki mat karo,
jo chala rahe hai desh ko,girvi rakha saaman ki tarah.

beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
bul gaye ki un se pahele,yeh babu ka makan tha.

vaise toh tere shehar mein suvidayein hai sab,
par tere shehar se barbadiyaan jaaye ki kab.

acchi tarah pata hai,chale jaana hai ek din,
fir bhi itna jodte hai paisa,ki rahena hai sadeeyon ki tarah.
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2009, 07:48:38 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 22, 2009, 03:16:56 PM
Shabdon ko mat chabayiyega, Paan ki tarah
Inka prayog kijiye, kripan ki tarah..

Kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
Jaise mili ho mufth mein, anudan ki tarah..

Sab baat karo bandu..!!, siyasat ki math karo,
Jo ho gayi hai, deh ki dukaan ki tarah..

Beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
Babu huwa hai, faltu saman ki tarah..

Vaise toh tere shehar mein, suvidayein hai sabhi
Deti na maza gaon ke siwan ki tarah..

Acchi tarah pata, chale jana hai ek din,
Jeete hai her ek din ko hum, mehman ki tarah..


wah very very very nice  ROJA ....

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2009, 07:49:38 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 23, 2009, 07:35:57 AM
roja ji aap toh kamaal ka likhti ho......

shabdon ko mat chabayega, paan ki tarah,
shabdon mein ghera raaz hai, zindagi ki tarah.

kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
ki baap ne chura ke di ho kisiki, usko zindagi.

sab baat karo bandu..!!siyasat ki mat karo,
jo chala rahe hai desh ko,girvi rakha saaman ki tarah.

beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
bul gaye ki un se pahele,yeh babu ka makan tha.

vaise toh tere shehar mein suvidayein hai sab,
par tere shehar se barbadiyaan jaaye ki kab.

acchi tarah pata hai,chale jaana hai ek din,
fir bhi itna jodte hai paisa,ki rahena hai sadeeyon ki tarah.


wah CARA ..... aap ney bhi bahut badiya likha hai

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2009, 05:27:21 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 22, 2009, 03:16:56 PM
Shabdon ko mat chabayiyega, Paan ki tarah
Inka prayog kijiye, kripan ki tarah..

Kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
Jaise mili ho mufth mein, anudan ki tarah..

Sab baat karo bandu..!!, siyasat ki math karo,
Jo ho gayi hai, deh ki dukaan ki tarah..

Beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
Babu huwa hai, faltu saman ki tarah..

Vaise toh tere shehar mein, suvidayein hai sabhi
Deti na maza gaon ke siwan ki tarah..

Acchi tarah pata, chale jana hai ek din,
Jeete hai her ek din ko hum, mehman ki tarah..


Wah Bhai Wah Kya kAhene is kalaam ke janab bahoth din baad likha magar mashallah qoob likha lakta itne dinoo mashaqath kar rahe the app!! Kya kahene is ghazal ke roja ji "qaas taur pe ye ashar"

Babu bangaya koi faltu samaan ki tarah " wah wah Roja ji kya haqeeqath hai !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe!!

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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2009, 05:47:39 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah bahoot khoob Roja... kamaal ka likha hai....

cara apne bahoot acha sath diya hai Roja ka....

good job!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2009, 05:53:04 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja.. Applause Applause Applause
Cara,aapne bhi bahut acha likha Applause Applause
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bahoooooooooooooooot sunder bahooooooooot umda likha hai roja....daad hajir hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2009, 06:09:08 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 23, 2009, 07:35:57 AM
roja ji aap toh kamaal ka likhti ho......

shabdon ko mat chabayega, paan ki tarah,
shabdon mein ghera raaz hai, zindagi ki tarah.

kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
ki baap ne chura ke di ho kisiki, usko zindagi.

sab baat karo bandu..!!siyasat ki mat karo,
jo chala rahe hai desh ko,girvi rakha saaman ki tarah.

beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
bul gaye ki un se pahele,yeh babu ka makan tha.

vaise toh tere shehar mein suvidayein hai sab,
par tere shehar se barbadiyaan jaaye ki kab.

acchi tarah pata hai,chale jaana hai ek din,
fir bhi itna jodte hai paisa,ki rahena hai sadeeyon ki tarah.

bahoot badhiya likha hai cara
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2009, 04:12:51 PM »
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Aap sab ka bahut bahut shukriya jii..  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2009, 01:43:07 PM »
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kya baat hai Roja ji jawab nahin.asghr icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2009, 02:58:46 PM »
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Quote from: Asghr on January 26, 2009, 01:43:07 PM
kya baat hai Roja ji jawab nahin.asghr icon_salut icon_salut

Thanks Asghr ji. Usual Smile
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