*Kona Makan Ka*

by Roja on January 22, 2009, 03:16:56 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 26, 2009, 03:01:41 PM »
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Excellent work Roja Applause Applause

An equally good reply Cara Ji
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«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2009, 03:13:31 PM »
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Excellent work Roja Applause Applause

An equally good reply Cara Ji

Thank you dear
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«Reply #17 on: January 26, 2009, 03:15:39 PM »
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roja ji aap toh kamaal ka likhti ho......

shabdon ko mat chabayega, paan ki tarah,
shabdon mein ghera raaz hai, zindagi ki tarah.

kuch log is tarah se udate hai zindagi,
ki baap ne chura ke di ho kisiki, usko zindagi.

sab baat karo bandu..!!siyasat ki mat karo,
jo chala rahe hai desh ko,girvi rakha saaman ki tarah.

beton ne de diya usse, kona makan ka,
bul gaye ki un se pahele,yeh babu ka makan tha.

vaise toh tere shehar mein suvidayein hai sab,
par tere shehar se barbadiyaan jaaye ki kab.

acchi tarah pata hai,chale jaana hai ek din,
fir bhi itna jodte hai paisa,ki rahena hai sadeeyon ki tarah.


Cara bahut sahi kaha aapka last do line mujhe bahut pasand aaya dear.
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