KOSHISH - E - GHAZAL......cara

by cara on May 07, 2013, 07:48:04 PM
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Khoob chal raha hai duar-e-ghazal
kam nazm zyada ho rahi hai ghazal

Ek se badhkar ek shayar hai yahaan
sab ke  sab jo hai ustad- e-ghazal

Kabhi ghazal nawabon ki shaan hua karti
ab aam aadmi ki bhi hai fasal-e-ghazal

Dil to chahta hai hum bhi ghazal likhe
darten hai kar payenge kya insaaf-e-ghazal

Aap sab ustadon se vinti karta hai "CARA"
itna bataiye kya ye hai "KOSHISH-E-GHAZAL
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2013, 08:25:13 PM »
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Quote from: cara on May 07, 2013, 07:48:04 PM
Khoob chal raha hai duar-e-ghazal
kam nazm zyada ho rahi hai ghazal

Ek se badhkar ek shayar hai yahaan
sab ke  sab jo hai ustad- e-ghazal

Kabhi ghazal nawabon ki shaan hua karti
ab aam aadmi ki bhi hai fasal-e-ghazal

Dil to chahta hai hum bhi ghazal likhe
darten hai kar payenge kya insaaf-e-ghazal

Aap sab ustadon se vinti karta hai "CARA"
itna bataiye kya ye hai "KOSHISH-E-GHAZAL

haan ji mujhe to kuch kuch aisa hi lagta hai icon_flower icon_flower....!
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2013, 10:22:29 PM »
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Cara Jee Aadaab..!


Janab bade dinoN baad bazm meiN vaapsi ki aapne khushi huyi... Usual Smile
Jee achchi koshish e gazal rahi aapki ... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Aur pur zor koshish karte rahiye... aap zaroor gazal kahna sikh jayeNga... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2013, 01:25:43 AM »
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Very Very Nice!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2013, 01:50:45 AM »
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Quote from: cara on May 07, 2013, 07:48:04 PM
Khoob chal raha hai duar-e-ghazal
kam nazm zyada ho rahi hai ghazal

Ek se badhkar ek shayar hai yahaan
sab ke  sab jo hai ustad- e-ghazal

Kabhi ghazal nawabon ki shaan hua karti
ab aam aadmi ki bhi hai fasal-e-ghazal

Dil to chahta hai hum bhi ghazal likhe
darten hai kar payenge kya insaaf-e-ghazal

Aap sab ustadon se vinti karta hai "CARA"
itna bataiye kya ye hai "KOSHISH-E-GHAZAL

vry nice cara sb
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2013, 04:24:04 AM »
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Nice Sharing happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2013, 11:45:52 AM »
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Khoob likha Hai Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2013, 01:17:53 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Careji,
Bahut khoob.Ye koshish-e-ghazal nahi,balki mukkammal ghazal hai.
Badhai ho aapko.
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2013, 01:38:41 PM »
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Quote from: cara on May 07, 2013, 07:48:04 PM
Khoob chal raha hai duar-e-ghazal
kam nazm zyada ho rahi hai ghazal

Ek se badhkar ek shayar hai yahaan
sab ke  sab jo hai ustad- e-ghazal

Kabhi ghazal nawabon ki shaan hua karti
ab aam aadmi ki bhi hai fasal-e-ghazal

Dil to chahta hai hum bhi ghazal likhe
darten hai kar payenge kya insaaf-e-ghazal

Aap sab ustadon se vinti karta hai "CARA"
itna bataiye kya ye hai "KOSHISH-E-GHAZAL

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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2013, 07:29:16 PM »
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waah waah waah. bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2013, 02:50:28 PM »
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SHEBA JI

PARWAAZ JI

SHIREEN HAKANI JI

SUMAN59 JI

BHUPENDRA KAUR JI

ADVO. RAVINDRARAVI JI

SUDHIR ASHQ JI

QALB JI

AQSH JI


Aap sab ka bahut bahut shukriya...thanks
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2013, 03:04:35 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2013, 03:22:34 PM »
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bahut achhi koshish hai Cara ji,bahut khoob, shubh kaamnayen
ghanshamdas ahuja
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2013, 07:15:56 PM »
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SKSAINI4 JI

AHUJAGD JI

Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya...thanks
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