Koshish.......!!!

by Talat on September 20, 2008, 10:13:13 AM
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2008, 10:22:16 AM »
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WAH WAH WAH......behad kareene se shabdon ko buna hai talat aapne.......shuru se ant tak ek laybaddh tareeke se apne maqsad ko saaf karti hui ye kavita....padhnewale par apna asar bakhoobi chodthi hai....
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2008, 11:47:00 AM »
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Aapne humesha hausla badhaya hai aur kuch naya likhne ko encourage kiya hai....bohot bohot shukriya Sanjeev Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2008, 08:03:04 PM »
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aapki aadhi ghazal to samaj me nahi aaya aap kehna kya chahti hain last last me thoda bohat to samaj aaya par bura na manna mira maza nahi aaya
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2008, 08:22:35 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on September 20, 2008, 08:03:04 PM
aapki aadhi ghazal to samaj me nahi aaya aap kehna kya chahti hain last last me thoda bohat to samaj aaya par bura na manna mira maza nahi aaya
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Bura maanne ki is main koi baat hi nahin !! Jab aapko samajh hi nahin aaya to maza kaise aata !!!  Kuch alag tarah ka likha tha, par sab ke samajh main aaye, ye bhi zaroori to nahin hai.

Phir bhi, aapne padha, iska tah-e-dil se shukriya.



p.s. Mujhe Talat kahiye ya Celmira. Mujhe Mira na kahen. Hope you dont mind Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2008, 06:17:48 AM »
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Very nice lines Celmira sis  Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2008, 07:00:21 AM »
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Beautiful Talat
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2008, 08:30:49 AM »
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Shukriya Honey, Harash
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2008, 06:30:32 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2008, 03:41:46 PM »
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talat koshish toh qabiletaarif hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sach main aapse itni achchi lines kii ummeed nahin thi magar ...........
kam aankna meri nadaani hogi.........

sar ko jhukaate hai sazde mein tere
 aur yeh khwahish karte hain
rahe har taraf bas aapke hi charche
 aur hum yunhi aapko padte rahe
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«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2008, 03:45:48 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Celmira  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut hi acha likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2008, 04:43:58 PM »
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wowww simply superb Celmira  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2008, 03:11:48 AM »
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Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai.
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2008, 06:39:03 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on October 04, 2008, 03:41:46 PM
talat koshish toh qabiletaarif hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sach main aapse itni achchi lines kii ummeed nahin thi magar ...........
kam aankna meri nadaani hogi.........

sar ko jhukaate hai sazde mein tere
 aur yeh khwahish karte hain
rahe har taraf bas aapke hi charche
 aur hum yunhi aapko padte rahe



Thank You so much Salil Aapne ye likh kar jo maan sammaan mujhe diya hai, main shayad use kabhi na bhool paaun......Bohot bohot shukriya  notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2008, 06:41:34 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 04, 2008, 03:45:48 PM
Bahut Khoob Celmira  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut hi acha likha hai aapne..

Thanks a lot dear friend Khwaish icon_flower Aap ko ye pasand aaya, aapk tah-e-dil se shukriya  happy3
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