Koshish.......!!!

by Talat on September 20, 2008, 10:13:13 AM
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Talat
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«Reply #15 on: October 06, 2008, 06:42:56 AM »
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wowww simply superb Celmira  Thumbs UP

Tumhara bohot bohot shukriya Sonia dear, tumhe mera likha hua pasand aaya  icon_king
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«Reply #16 on: October 06, 2008, 06:44:06 AM »
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Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai.

I always wait for your comments Bharat..Thank You so much  notworthy
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #17 on: October 06, 2008, 07:38:01 AM »
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Bahut sundar hai likhne ka andaaz tera
Padh kar baag baag ho gaya hai dil mera
Prerna milta aap se hum jaise shayaron ko
Koshish hum bhi karen ki apnaye is andaaz ko

Very well presented piece of work   Thumbs UP
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2008, 01:46:38 PM »
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Bahut sundar hai likhne ka andaaz tera
Padh kar baag baag ho gaya hai dil mera
Prerna milta aap se hum jaise shayaron ko
Koshish hum bhi karen ki apnaye is andaaz ko

Very well presented piece of work   Thumbs UP


Hello Rajesh,

Thanks so much for your lovely appreciation   icon_flower


Aap sab doston ke comments padh ke ek sher yaad aa gaya:

Hazaron saal nargis apni benoori pe roti hai,
Badi mushkil se hota hai chaman main deedavar paida !!

Shukrguzar hoon aap sab doston ki, jinki hauslaafzaai ne mujhe bohot himmat di hai  notworthy

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