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by khamosh_aawaaz on December 06, 2011, 10:34:26 AM
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                          mere ta'lluq ne aaj mujhe rulayaa bahut.!
                          unke lafzo.n ne khamoshi ko wargalayaa bahut.!!

                          rahe na andheraa mere aangan kabhi bhi,
                          roshni ke liye khud ko jalaayaa bahut,
                          
                          hanstaa rahaa zamanaa meri iss harkat pe,
                          sehra mein humne kashti ko chlayaa bahut,

                          hai nizaam-e-qudrat ye ho nahin sakta,
                        rah kar samandar mein saahilo.n ko milayaa bahut,

                         apni aashiqi hi shayad kamzor thi khamosh..!
                         ghazlo.n ne waise maashuq ko bulayaa bahut.!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2011, 11:13:18 AM »
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                          mere ta'lluq ne aaj mujhe rulayaa bahut.!
                          unke lafzo.n ne khamoshi ko wargalayaa bahut.!!

                          rahe na andheraa mere aangan kabhi bhi,
                          roshni ke liye khud ko jalaayaa bahut,
                         
                          hanstaa rahaa zamanaa meri iss harkat pe,
                          sehra mein humne kashti ko chlayaa bahut,

                          hai nizaam-e-qudrat ye ho nahin sakta,
                        rah kar samandar mein saahilo.n ko milayaa bahut,

                         apni aashiqi hi shayad kamzor thi khamosh..!
                         ghazlo.n ne waise maashuq ko bulayaa bahut.!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz Ji..

Khoobsurat peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2011, 11:39:04 AM »
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Khamosh Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah janab kia kahne behad khub kalaam kahi hai aapne
behad achche ahsas O khayaal aur khub bayaani rahi janab..

Ahsaas dil se gurte se gaye... Usual Smile Behad achche janab...

AIk dilfareb kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2011, 04:27:22 PM »
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 Bahut  khoob , KA ji . Har  sher  lajawab  hai ; lekin iss sher per  dohri  daad  hazir  hai.Hasan

          rahe na andheraa mere aangan kabhi bhi,
          roshni ke liye khud ko jalaayaa bahut,
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2011, 04:35:08 PM »
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bahut khoob...wah..!! Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2011, 05:12:35 PM »
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                          mere ta'lluq ne aaj mujhe rulayaa bahut.!
                          unke lafzo.n ne khamoshi ko wargalayaa bahut.!!

                          rahe na andheraa mere aangan kabhi bhi,
                          roshni ke liye khud ko jalaayaa bahut,
                         
                          hanstaa rahaa zamanaa meri iss harkat pe,
                          sehra mein humne kashti ko chlayaa bahut,

                          hai nizaam-e-qudrat ye ho nahin sakta,
                        rah kar samandar mein saahilo.n ko milayaa bahut,

                         apni aashiqi hi shayad kamzor thi khamosh..!
                         ghazlo.n ne waise maashuq ko bulayaa bahut.!!

wah wah Khamosh ji--
kya gazabb ki kalaam laye hain
bht khoob janaab baht khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2012, 08:54:27 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz Ji..

Khoobsurat peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



THANX

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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2012, 01:26:06 PM »
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Khamosh Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah janab kia kahne behad khub kalaam kahi hai aapne
behad achche ahsas O khayaal aur khub bayaani rahi janab..

Ahsaas dil se gurte se gaye... Usual Smile Behad achche janab...

AIk dilfareb kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2012, 10:21:44 AM »
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Bahut  khoob , KA ji . Har  sher  lajawab  hai ; lekin iss sher per  dohri  daad  hazir  hai.Hasan

          rahe na andheraa mere aangan kabhi bhi,
          roshni ke liye khud ko jalaayaa bahut,

THANX FHS
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2012, 10:37:30 AM »
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Bahut bahut sunder par sorry mujhse n jaane kyoon chhoot gayee ye post khair der se hee sahee par is achhee peshkash ke liye badhaai sweekaar karen khaamosh ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2012, 08:50:45 AM »
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bahut khoob...wah..!! Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanx
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