Koyi mujhse

by suman59 on July 15, 2012, 01:13:58 PM
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Koyi mujhse likhwata hai, verna mujhko kya aata hai
Karam ki baat nirali, bhitar koyi hai... gaata hai
Aansu bhi rachte hai kavita, anubhav toh yeh batlata hai
Kavita ne joda hai sabko, dunia se apana nata hai
Rachna ki pyari dunia mein, kaun paraya reh paata hai
Rachte-rachte mann bhi apna rachna jaisa bann jaata hai
Soyee dunia jaage serjak, shabdon se jiska naata hai
Kavitawon ke sundar ghar mein, keval sundar-mann aata hai
Serjak ko toh Ishwar aa kar apne darshan karwata hai
Geet agar gita ban jaaye, "Krishn" tabhi muska paata hai
Likhe-pade toh unpad, dheere-dheere tar jaata hai..
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2012, 01:15:52 PM »
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vah bahut khoob sumanji
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2012, 01:17:30 PM »
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Bahut Umda..
Behtar bayaanee.. gahre jajbaat..
Likhte rahiye.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2012, 03:26:11 PM »
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waah waah bahut sunder dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2012, 07:14:20 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on July 15, 2012, 01:13:58 PM

Geet agar gita ban jaaye, "Krishn" tabhi muska paata hai
Likhe-pade toh unpad, dheere-dheere tar jaata hai..






wwwwaaaaaaahhhh waaaaaaahhhh waaaaaaaahhhh

kya khooooob kaha hai aapne aunty g Usual Smile
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

apki kavita ka saar bohot khoob laga Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2012, 03:20:36 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT KHUB SUMAN jI Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2012, 04:10:47 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob Suman ji.....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2012, 07:21:59 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 15, 2012, 01:15:52 PM
vah bahut khoob sumanji

shukriya nandbahu jee
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2012, 07:22:31 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 15, 2012, 01:17:30 PM
Bahut Umda..
Behtar bayaanee.. gahre jajbaat..
Likhte rahiye.
Applause Applause

thanks jee
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2012, 07:27:05 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 15, 2012, 03:26:11 PM
waah waah bahut sunder dheron daad

aapne accha kaha aur mai sach mein bahut khush ho gayee dr. sb.
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2012, 07:27:42 AM »
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Quote from: roy on July 16, 2012, 07:14:20 AM
wwwwaaaaaaahhhh waaaaaaahhhh waaaaaaaahhhh

kya khooooob kaha hai aapne aunty g Usual Smile
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

apki kavita ka saar bohot khoob laga Applause Applause Applause

shukriya beta aapne pada aur tarif bi ki.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2012, 07:28:19 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 17, 2012, 03:20:36 AM
BAHUT BAHUT KHUB SUMAN jI Applause Applause

tks sanjeev kash jee
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 18, 2012, 04:10:47 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob Suman ji.....!!!

kafi dino ke baat aap ko dekha bahut accha laga aur thank you very much aapne kavita pada aur tarif bi ki.
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2012, 07:54:31 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob suman ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2012, 03:28:59 PM »
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ab yunhi kabhi kabhi dikhaai dungaa... tongue3

Quote from: suman59 on July 18, 2012, 07:29:54 AM
kafi dino ke baat aap ko dekha bahut accha laga aur thank you very much aapne kavita pada aur tarif bi ki.
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