~Kuch adaein main khoob janta hoon~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 23, 2010, 07:12:51 PM
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Ashkon ko muskurahat se chupane ki ada main khoob janta hoon,
Dard main khushi dikhane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

Na chorro mujhe iss duniya main yunhi tum akela,
Bheed main kho jane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

‘Khamosh’ kay ashkon ka sabab sirf dard nahin hota yaaron,
Khushion main bhi palkein bheegane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

Woh aur hote honge jinhe ata hoga haath churrana,
Bewaffa se bhi wafa nibhana main khoob janta hoon..

Najane kya likhna chahta tha aur kya kehgaya ‘Khamosh’,
Kalam se dil ko baha dene ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2010, 07:14:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob dost... sach me aapne Kalam se dil ko baha diya hai....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2010, 07:16:24 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost..Hamesha saath nibhane kay liye teh dil se shukriya.!
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2010, 07:20:58 PM »
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wahhhh wahhhhh wahhhh.......bht hi mast likha hai rahim sply last stanza....
mastam
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2010, 07:24:03 PM »
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Shukriya Anamika di..!
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2010, 07:44:12 PM »
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Raheem Sahab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob adaayeN hai aapki..... realy very good..
Kuch mistakes hai modify kar lijiye...

Baki aapke khayaal aur kalaam ki bayaani behad achchi rahi..
Dil se daad hazir hai... Kabool kijiye

aisa hi kuch likha tha humne arz karte hai...


Har raah se guzarne ka hunar janta huN maiN
DiloN meiN utarne ka hunar janta huN maiN

Kya daag doge mere daman pe tum dekar dekho
Har daag se nikharne ka hunar janta huN maiN

likhate rhaiye...
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez......
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2010, 07:49:14 PM »
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Shukriya Parwaaz saab..
Bahaut achi lines share ki hai apne..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2010, 08:00:37 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 23, 2010, 07:12:51 PM
Ashkon ko muskurahat se chupane ki ada main khoob janta hoon,
Dard main khushi dikhane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

Na chorro mujhe iss duniya main yunhi tum akela,
Bheed main kho jane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

‘Khamosh’ kay ashkon ka sabab sirf dard nahin hota yaaron,
Khushion main bhi palkein bheegane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

Woh aur hote honge jinhe ata hoga haath churrana,
Bewaffa se bhi wafa nibhana main khoob janta hoon..

Najane kya likhna chahta tha aur kya kehgaya ‘Khamosh’,
Kalam se dil ko baha dene ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

~Rahim~

rahim sb bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2010, 11:06:36 AM »
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no words...... Clapping Smiley

 Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2010, 12:02:43 PM »
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ahaaa bahut khoob....
aji ab hath na rukege pesh karta kuchh apne labzo me~


haseeno ki mehfil me na chhodo mujhe
dil churaane ka ilm to me bhi janta hun

yun to he kai ghayal unke nazro-sitam ke
jao keh do ki teer chalana to me bhi janta hun

sabhi kehete he anjum-e-mehfil me koi nahi bacha tujhse
shikari tu akeli nahi shikaar karna to me bhi janta hun

tu maan le manti he khudi ko hoor agar
paththar me se noor chunna to me bhi janta hun~
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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2010, 12:12:33 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhh.abhi waahhhhhhhh.........

kya baat hai .....mast mast.......
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2010, 06:25:23 PM »
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Marhoom Bahayat, Devangi jee, Abhi jee..Teh dil se shukriya!
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 06:32:17 PM »
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Abhi jee..Mastam..bahaut bahaut acha likha hai..! Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 02:44:32 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 23, 2010, 07:12:51 PM
Ashkon ko muskurahat se chupane ki ada main khoob janta hoon,
Dard main khushi dikhane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

Na chorro mujhe iss duniya main yunhi tum akela,
Bheed main kho jane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

‘Khamosh’ kay ashkon ka sabab sirf dard nahin hota yaaron,
Khushion main bhi palkein bheegane ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

Woh aur hote honge jinhe ata hoga haath churrana,
Bewaffa se bhi wafa nibhana main khoob janta hoon..

Najane kya likhna chahta tha aur kya kehgaya ‘Khamosh’,
Kalam se dil ko baha dene ki ada main khoob janta hoon..

~Rahim~

Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2010, 04:20:16 AM »
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Shukriya Rajesh jee!
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