kuch baat hoti----Ritesh modi

by Ritesh Modi on December 13, 2012, 11:21:15 AM
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Tera gam bhulane maikhane na jaate toh kuch baat hoti,
Tum agar nashile nigaaho se pilati toh kuch baat hoti,

Khud apne husn ko sajaao toh kya usmein baat hai,
Mere haatho se agar tum sajti toh kuch baat hoti,

Yu hawao mein apne iitr ko mehakao toh koi baat nahi,
Meri mohabbat se hawayein mehak jati toh kuch baat hoti,

Dekh hame toh waise gulistaan muskurata hai,
Hame dekh tum agar muskurati toh kuch baat hoti,

Zindagi toh yu bhi kat jayegi bin tere lekin wo baat na hogi,
Tera saath agar mil jaata zindagi mein toh kuch baat hoti..
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 11:39:31 AM »
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bahut khubsurati se shabdon ko ek mala main piroya hai .....v v nice....
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 11:40:59 AM »
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bahut khubsurati se shabdon ko ek mala main piroya hai .....v v nice....
thank you gaytri ji....
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 01:19:44 PM »
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Zindagi toh yu bhi kat jayegi bin tere lekin wo baat na hogi,
Tera saath agar mil jaata zindagi mein toh kuch baat hoti..

Applause Applause

bahut khoob ritesh jee
pyaara kalaam. wah wah wah

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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 01:25:21 PM »
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Zindagi toh yu bhi kat jayegi bin tere lekin wo baat na hogi,
Tera saath agar mil jaata zindagi mein toh kuch baat hoti..

Applause Applause

bahut khoob ritesh jee
pyaara kalaam. wah wah wah


Thank you ji...
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 01:26:37 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very beautiful lines
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 01:30:38 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very beautiful lines
Thank you ji....
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2012, 01:50:10 PM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2012, 01:59:03 PM »
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beautiful
Thank you saini ji...
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2012, 12:54:44 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 04:26:31 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 05:53:48 AM »
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bahut khoob
thank you
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2012, 06:07:52 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2012, 06:22:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ritesh ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 15, 2012, 04:27:41 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ritesh ji....!!!
thank you
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