KUCH BAAT KIJIYE.........soudagar

by soudagar on October 11, 2012, 05:02:17 PM
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Mile ho tum kitne dino baad kuch baaat kijiye
 kahiye to apne dil ke jazbaat kuch bat kijiye

 bichhde the to bichad gya mujhse mousam e bahar
 aaj phir mila h mousam ka sath kuch baat kijiye

 tere sang bita ek ek pal  sougat tha mere liye
 do aaj phir unhi palon ki sougat kuch baat kijiye

 tere bina ek ek lmha aansuon se bhara tha mere liye
 mere bin beete dino ka do hisab kuch baat kijiye

 tere khyalon mein kate din tere khwabo mein kati raat
 kaise kaate tune apne din raat kuch baat kijiye

 ab kuch keh bhi do dil sunne ko tras rha h tmhri aawaj
 na do sirf apni aakhon se jawab kuch baat kjiye

 din yuhin hi dhal gaya khamoshiyon ki baton mein
 dheere dheere dhalne lagi hai rat kuch baat kijiye
 ab to kahiye apne dil ke jazbaat kuch baat kijiye
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2012, 05:29:40 PM »
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Saudagar Jee aadaab!

Aray janab abhi zarra itminaan to lene dijiye...
Phir kar leNge woH aapse bhi baateN... Usual Smile

Achchi kalaam kahi hai janab... sabhi ashaar khoob rahe...
ahsaas O khayaal bhi umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

humari dheron daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2012, 06:49:07 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on October 11, 2012, 05:02:17 PM
Mile ho tum kitne dino baad kuch baaat kijiye
 kahiye to apne dil ke jazbaat kuch bat kijiye
tum hi bolo agar main shuru hui to phir khair nahin tumhaari Laughing hard Laughing hard
 bichhde the to bichad gya mujhse mousam e bahar
 aaj phir mila h mousam ka sath kuch baat kijiye
mausam se hi guftagoo karo main chup-chaap sunu gi Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
 tere sang bita ek ek pal  sougat tha mere liye
 do aaj phir unhi palon ki sougat kuch baat kijiye
acha vo saughat vapas kar do phir baat karoon gi ke aur bhi talabgaar hain pade raah mein mere icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
 tere bina ek ek lmha aansuon se bhara tha mere liye
 mere bin beete dino ka do hisab kuch baat kijiye
tum jaante nahin main hisaab mein hamesha se kamzor rahi hoon 100 mein kitne zero hote hain aaj tak pata nahin aur hisaab maangne chale ho tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
 tere khyalon mein kate din tere khwabo mein kati raat
 kaise kaate tune apne din raat kuch baat kijiye
arrrrrrrrey badi mushkil se kate din light nahin ooper se paseena aur raat mein machcharon ne sone nahin diya ji icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
 ab kuch keh bhi do dil sunne ko tras rha h tmhri aawaj
 na do sirf apni aakhon se jawab kuch baat kjiye
speaker nahin hai mere paas lafzo.n se hi kaam chala lo janaab Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
 din yuhin hi dhal gaya khamoshiyon ki baton mein
 dheere dheere dhalne lagi hai rat kuch baat kijiye
 ab to kahiye apne dil ke jazbaat kuch baat kijiye
   acha to main chalti hoon.....ye mat puchna ---phir kab milo  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower :icon_flower:gi


bahut hi khoob kalaam saudagar...........!
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2012, 07:11:14 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2012, 01:21:57 AM »
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Soudagar Aap sach may soudagar ho. mujeh aap ki sab rachnaey bahut pasand hai.
sheel didi
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veri nice Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2012, 03:11:50 AM »
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bohut khub saudagar bhai
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2012, 03:50:32 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 03:51:13 AM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2012, 08:19:19 AM »
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Nice poetry
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2012, 09:15:57 AM »
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very nice  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 13, 2012, 03:08:08 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA PARWAZ JIII
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«Reply #12 on: October 13, 2012, 01:12:45 PM »
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Bahut BAhut Khub Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: October 13, 2012, 04:56:08 PM »
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aapke comment padhna kisi bh ipost par badha achha lagta hai.....bahut bahut shukriya sheba ji
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2012, 02:35:40 AM »
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shukirya hriday ji
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