**Kuch bhutle jaa rahe hai**

by dead heart on June 07, 2009, 09:31:25 AM
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Paise ki khoj main aaj kal duniya wale,
Apnon ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Jo chahta hai hume usse chorr kar,
Gheron ki baahon main toot te jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Rote hai log tanhaion main jaa kar,
Shayad dilbaar ki baahon ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Dusron ki panchat lagi hai sabhi ko,
Khud ke ghar ke halat bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Shahrukh aur Amitabh ka janam din toh yaad hai,
Maa baap ki sagai ki tarikh bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Kisi gher ki maut ki wajah toh pata hai hume,
Lekin kam se ane par baap ka haal puchna bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Jab ek dinn maa chawal ke bajae roti deti hai toh chikte hai hum,
Kuch log har roz bhook se mar rahe hai; yeh baat bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Kisi ke latiffe par toh khul ke has lete hai hum,
Maa royi thi kal humare datne par;aise lamhe bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Qadar nahin hai hume aaj apnon ki,
Khuda ne maut banayi hai; yeh baat bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Iss bhag dorr main ek khayal ke saath thamgaya hai
Rahim,
Paise ki khoj main pyaar ko khote jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 11:07:17 AM »
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Paise ki khoj main aaj kal duniya wale,
Apnon ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Jo chahta hai hume usse chorr kar,
Gheron ki baahon main toot te jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Rote hai log tanhaion main jaa kar,
Shayad dilbaar ki baahon ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Dusron ki panchat lagi hai sabhi ko,
Khud ke ghar ke halat bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Shahrukh aur Amitabh ka janam din toh yaad hai,
Maa baap ki sagai ki tarikh bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Kisi gher ki maut ki wajah toh pata hai hume,
Lekin kam se ane par baap ka haal puchna bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Jab ek dinn maa chawal ke bajae roti deti hai toh chikte hai hum,
Kuch log har roz bhook se mar rahe hai; yeh baat bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Kisi ke latiffe par toh khul ke has lete hai hum,
Maa royi thi kal humare datne par;aise lamhe bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...

Qadar nahin hai hume aaj apnon ki,
Khuda ne maut banayi hai; yeh baat bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Iss bhag dorr main ek khayal ke saath thamgaya hai
Rahim,
Paise ki khoj main pyaar ko khote jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...



Mashallah
Subhanaal
kamaal likha hai Rahim Bhai
bahut umda peshkash hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 11:11:04 AM »
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Shukriya Kashish di!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 11:20:35 AM »
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aapne itni khoobsurat peshkash ki hai ki shukriya to humein kehna chahiye....
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 11:23:24 AM »
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Acha hai ke apko acha laga...Ek sandesh dena chahta hoon main samaj ko ke log kuch bhulte jaa rahe hai...
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 11:44:10 AM »
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bahut bahut khub likha h aapne Rahim ji.......har lafj ek sachai byan kar rha h....... Applause Applause Applause

 Aaj ka insaan khud ko bhulta ja rha h khuch yaad h to sirf paisa kmana aur dikhawe ki duniya me jeena......
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2009, 11:45:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob... Rahim bahut accha laga padkar.  Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2009, 03:28:22 PM »
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Shukriya Poppoetry aur Roja di...
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 04:24:53 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Rahim!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapki Soch Ki Tareef Karna Chaahta Hoon..Bahut Ache..
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 04:28:23 PM »
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Just too beautiful Rahim...

Lafz nahi hia tarif karne ke liye, bas itna kahungi ke in jazbaaton ko samajh jaye log aur amal karein to shayad zindagi ka rukh, zindagi jeene ka maza kuchh aur hi ho...

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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 08:04:27 AM »
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Shukriya Angel di aur Khwahish jee...
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 08:07:15 AM »
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Waah Kya kHoob LIkha Hai Rahim Bhai, Great Job Yaar Boat Achche,.
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 07:01:48 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bhaijan...
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 08:47:37 PM »
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 Applause  Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot khoob Rahim
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 09:58:55 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di
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