Kuch Dhoondli Si Yaadein "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: May 17, 2010, 01:33:02 PM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 13, 2010, 09:43:07 PM
bade hi khoobsurat andaaz main likha hai aapne..bahot khoob

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«Reply #16 on: May 17, 2010, 01:47:14 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on May 14, 2010, 01:32:21 AM
great job

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«Reply #17 on: May 18, 2010, 08:14:24 AM »
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Good work Khwaish-bhai...Ati sunder... Applause Applause Applause

Yahi jeevan ki sachayi hai.....kadva sach...

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«Reply #18 on: May 18, 2010, 09:17:22 AM »
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bahoth qoob khawish sahab ,, behad achi nazm hai ,, kya ye wohi nazm hai jiska hame intezaar tha ,, lagti to wohi hai ,, bahr kaif dad hazir hai apki is taqleeq pe qubool karen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #19 on: May 19, 2010, 08:18:18 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 14, 2010, 12:25:53 PM
Bahaut khoob Yaar...Hamesha ki tarha bahaut acha likha hai...kuch lines, Rahim ke dil main sama gayi... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim,Yuhi Saath Dete rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2010, 02:32:20 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 15, 2010, 06:15:00 AM
Khwaish Bhaiiiiiiiiii Aap To Kamaal Hain Yaaar.. Jab Bhi Kuch Le kar aate Hain, Wo Har Nazm Apne Aap me Behtreeen aur Khubsoorat Ehasaason Se Saji Hoti hai...!!!   icon_salut icon_salut

Bachpan Ki Yaadon Ko Behad Maasoomiyat se Kaagaz par Utaara hai aapne.. Lafzon ko Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai aaapne..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


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Mann Bhai, Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jo Aapne Itni Izzat Bakshi..Mannji Aap Jaise Kadardaan Ho To Hi Kuch Likhne Ki Himmat Jod Paate Hai..bas Yehi Umeed Rakhta Hoon Aapse Ke Aap Yuhi Hausla-Afzaai karte Rahe..

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«Reply #21 on: May 20, 2010, 03:44:57 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz mein beete waqt ki yaaden pyaare aur nazuk andaaz mein keh diya yun lagtaa tha jaise nazm nahin koi meri apni puraani yaaden taaza kartaa ho.khwaishji yun hi likhte rahiye humen aanand uthaane ka mauka dete rahiye.
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«Reply #22 on: May 25, 2010, 01:09:41 PM »
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Jitani parshansa ki jaaye, utani kam khwaish ji... bahoot waqat baad akar ajj yoindia mai parra hai.... kamaal@dhamaal.superbbb

yeh lines sab kuch kah jaati hai:

Dil Ke Jageh Mein Mehsoos Hota Hai jaise Pathar Sa Laga gayi
Kuch Dhoondli si yaadein inn Palkon ko bhiga gay

hamesha khush raho dost!!!

 Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Hats off to you!

Thanks A Million Dear Pooja..

Ab Aapke Comments Paana Bhi,Kismat Ki baat Ban gayi Hai..Jaanta Hoon Bhaut Mushkil Ho gaya Hai Aapka Yo par Aana,Par Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Waqt Nikala Kijiye..

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«Reply #23 on: May 31, 2010, 09:19:15 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 16, 2010, 08:19:30 PM
Wah wah Khwaish ji,bahut sachai,gaherai aur khoobsurati se likha aapne ye nazm,
bahut bahut khoob,aapke bhi na ek alag andaaz hota hai likhne ka.bahut pasand aayi aapke nazm,Kapil ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya Khwaish ji ka.excellent creation icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 18, 2010, 09:17:22 AM
bahoth qoob khawish sahab ,, behad achi nazm hai ,, kya ye wohi nazm hai jiska hame intezaar tha ,, lagti to wohi hai ,, bahr kaif dad hazir hai apki is taqleeq pe qubool karen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #25 on: March 01, 2011, 03:07:31 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2010, 03:44:57 PM
bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz mein beete waqt ki yaaden pyaare aur nazuk andaaz mein keh diya yun lagtaa tha jaise nazm nahin koi meri apni puraani yaaden taaza kartaa ho.khwaishji yun hi likhte rahiye humen aanand uthaane ka mauka dete rahiye.
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«Reply #26 on: April 20, 2011, 06:03:41 AM »
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bahut ache...
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«Reply #27 on: April 20, 2011, 06:16:45 AM »
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bahut bahut khub khwaishji.... gahri baat... badiya......
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«Reply #28 on: May 20, 2011, 09:20:41 AM »
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Quote from: Sadiq02 on April 20, 2011, 06:03:41 AM
bahut ache...

Ji Shukriya sadiq Ji Aapka icon_flower
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