**Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai**

by dead heart on June 12, 2009, 11:13:48 PM
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Kyun zindagi se khilwad karte jaa rahe hai hum,
Kyun Khuda ki di hui duniya tabah karte jaa rahe hai hum,
Dokha aur fareb wusool banke rehgaye hai humare liye,
Kyun khud ko ki khokle karte jaa rahe hai hum,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...

Imtehaan ke waqt khoob khelte hai hum,
Phir results ane par kyun naseeb ko koste jaa rahe hai,
Bachpan main maa baap ka tokna acha nahin lagta tha,
Phir aaj bade ho kar kyun maa baap ko dant te jaa rahe hai,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...

Zindagi ek khilone se zada kuch bhi nahin hai humare liye,
Kyun zindagi ki ehmiat ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Mehboob ke labon main rehne ko pyaar kehte hai hum,
Kyun mohobat ko jismon se jhodte jaa rahe hai  hum,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...

Marte hai masoomon ko jihad ke naam par aaj,
Mazhabi kitabon ke sabak bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Bas ek haqeeqat bayan karte rehgaya iss ghazal main Rahim,
Phir kyun log isse padkar ansoona karte jaa rahe hai,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2009, 02:07:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim bhai khubsurat rachna hai
wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2009, 02:36:56 AM »
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WAAH ! WAAH ! RAHIM JI
ACHCHA QALAAM HAI
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2009, 05:19:45 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 12, 2009, 11:13:48 PM
Kyun zindagi se khilwad karte jaa rahe hai hum,
Kyun Khuda ki di hui duniya tabah karte jaa rahe hai hum,
Dokha aur fareb wusool banke rehgaye hai humare liye,
Kyun khud ko ki khokle karte jaa rahe hai hum,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...

Imtehaan ke waqt khoob khelte hai hum,
Phir results ane par kyun naseeb ko koste jaa rahe hai,
Bachpan main maa baap ka tokna acha nahin lagta tha,
Phir aaj bade ho kar kyun maa baap ko dant te jaa rahe hai,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...

Zindagi ek khilone se zada kuch bhi nahin hai humare liye,
Kyun zindagi ki ehmiat ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Mehboob ke labon main rehne ko pyaar kehte hai hum,
Kyun mohobat ko jismon se jhodte jaa rahe hai  hum,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...

Marte hai masoomon ko jihad ke naam par aaj,
Mazhabi kitabon ke sabak bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Bas ek haqeeqat bayan karte rehgaya iss ghazal main Rahim,
Phir kyun log isse padkar ansoona karte jaa rahe hai,
Kuch galat karte jaa rahe hai hum...




BAHAUT ACHCHEY RAHIM BHAI
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2009, 05:50:29 AM »
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Brilliant,very nice and beautiful creation.Rahim ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2009, 10:37:02 AM »
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Bahut khub Rahim Ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2009, 11:51:08 AM »
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[b[bahut achche rahim dear..........khoob likhte ho yaar.yeh andaaz toh chha gaya dil par
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2009, 07:40:44 PM »
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Shukriya Saahil bhaijan, Jannat jee, Sarvesh jee, KA jee, Madhu jee aur Shab jee!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2009, 02:59:09 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah.. Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Lajawab Soch Ke sath Lafzon ko Sajaaya hai Dear.. zindgi Ke Kuch Chuninda Pahaloouo Ko Badi Khubsoorati se Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Dil khush hogaya aapki yeh Rachna padh kar.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2009, 03:08:15 PM »
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bahut khoob Rahim Bhai Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2009, 09:43:06 AM »
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Shukriya Vikas bhaijan aur Kashish di!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2009, 09:48:30 AM »
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Wah Rahim bahut acha likha hai...bahut khoob...
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2009, 09:59:36 AM »
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Shukriya Punam di!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2009, 08:02:30 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Rahim..Bahut Hi Aacha likha hai..!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Sorry for late reply!!. DOH

Shally.
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«Reply #14 on: June 23, 2009, 08:33:07 AM »
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No problem Shally jee and thanks alot
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