~*~ Kuch khamosh ehsaas ~*~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

dead heart

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Iss mehfil main najane kitne log parrte hai mujhe,
Dil se parrne walon kay dil mein samata hoon main..

Jazbaat aise hai mere kay sihai se zada ashk behte hai,
Meri nazm se najane kitni palkein bheegata hoon main..

Har nazm main zindagi ka ek sabak likhne ki koshish hoti hai,
Par najane kitne dillon tak ponch pata hoon main..

Jo chorr gaya mujhe beech raah par zindagi ki,
Najane kyun ussi Zalim se dil lagata hoon main..

‘Khamosh’ ki kalam likhe waqt bilkul ek behti nadi ki misal hai,
Kabhi kabhi khud ko nahin pata chalta kay kya kya likh jata hoon main..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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nirala

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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh ehsaas ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 06:02:24 AM »

sachhi tumhari mohabat hai, kalam sur suhai se
yahi batlaate ho
masoom zazbaaton me piroye shabdo se,sabi ke dil me
hazaron ghar banate ho
har baar karte ho palko ko nam humari
itne gahre ehsaason se dard ke jaam bharte ho
""
Rahim dost aapki kalaam ufff
kya kahen--
agar Nirala ke paas likhne ki kabiliyat hoti to aap jesa hi likhta
"
thanx
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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh ehsaas ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 09:55:08 AM »

Quote from: nirala on February 23, 2011, 06:02:24 AM

Dost, bahaut barra compliment de gaye mujhe..
apka teh dil se shukriya..bahaut achi 4 lines
main bahaut acha kehgaye..
dil dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh ehsaas ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 06:50:26 PM »

BAhut Khub Rahim Bhai


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh ehsaas ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 07:32:35 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 23, 2011, 06:50:26 PM

BAhut Khub Rahim Bhai

Shukriya Rishi bhai..
Khush rahiye..!


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