~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

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Behad veeran aur sunsan raahein hai zindagi ki,
Na koi saath hai, na dhoor dhoor tak, koi dikhta hai..

Jo gumta hai labon par muskaan liye dinn bhar,
Raaton main kisi kone baith, woh bhi sisakta hai..

Imaan chahe shabnaam jitna pak ho kisi insaan ka,
Apne parivar kay pet kay agey, woh bhi bikta hai..

‘mat karo guroor itna ae insaanon, akhir yahin ana hai’,
Har lamhe main, har kabrastan bas yehi chhikta hai..

Umeed na rakhna meri nazmon main shayaron wali ada ki,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas jazbaton ko lavzon main dubo kay likhta hai..

Behad veeran aur sunsan raahein hai zindagi ki,
Na koi saath hai, na dhoor dhoor tak, koi dikhta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 11:52:04 PM »
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Waaah waaaah waaaaah kyaa jazbaat bayaani hai!!!!!!bahut khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2011, 02:37:25 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim bhai.
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2011, 02:45:33 AM »
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sach hai
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2011, 03:31:28 AM »
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Wah Wah RAhim Bahi ek ek sher lajawab hai
puri sachai byaan ki hai aap ne aapne sheo mein
Bahut Bahut Bahut.................... khub
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2011, 04:12:18 AM »
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Rahim bhai itnaa khoobsoorat kahta ho zaraa matle kaa bhee iste maal agar ghazal men karo to chaar chaandlag jaayenge ghazal men
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2011, 06:42:10 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 22, 2011, 11:52:04 PM
Waaah waaaah waaaaah kyaa jazbaat bayaani hai!!!!!!bahut khoob!
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Mamta jee.
Bas yunhi saath banaye rakhiyega apna..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2011, 06:44:17 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 23, 2011, 02:37:25 AM
Bahut Khoob Rahim bhai.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya MKV jee..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2011, 06:47:05 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 22, 2011, 11:15:47 PM
Behad veeran aur sunsan raahein hai zindagi ki,
Na koi saath hai, na dhoor dhoor tak, koi dikhta hai..

Jo gumta hai labon par muskaan liye dinn bhar,
Raaton main kisi kone baith, woh bhi sisakta hai..

Imaan chahe shabnaam jitna pak ho kisi insaan ka,
Apne parivar kay pet kay agey, woh bhi bikta hai..

‘mat karo guroor itna ae insaanon, akhir yahin ana hai’,
Har lamhe main, har kabrastan bas yehi chhikta hai..

Umeed na rakhna meri nazmon main shayaron wali ada ki,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas jazbaton ko lavzon main dubo kay likhta hai..

Behad veeran aur sunsan raahein hai zindagi ki,
Na koi saath hai, na dhoor dhoor tak, koi dikhta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Mere Dost Lajawab Likha Hai Aapne...

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob!!!!!

Har Ek As'haar Apni Chaap Chohdta Hua..

Bhaut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2011, 06:50:26 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on December 23, 2011, 02:45:33 AM
sach hai
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Dost mere,
shukriya shukriya apka saath kay liye..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2011, 06:51:22 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on December 23, 2011, 03:31:28 AM
Wah Wah RAhim Bahi ek ek sher lajawab hai
puri sachai byaan ki hai aap ne aapne sheo mein
Bahut Bahut Bahut.................... khub
Kash jee,
Teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Apna saath yunhi banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2011, 06:52:43 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 23, 2011, 04:12:18 AM
Rahim bhai itnaa khoobsoorat kahta ho zaraa matle kaa bhee iste maal agar ghazal men karo to chaar chaandlag jaayenge ghazal men
Sksaini jee,
Zaroor gaur karenge iss baat par bhi..
Apka teh dil se shukriya mere dost..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2011, 06:53:50 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 23, 2011, 06:47:05 AM
Mere Dost Lajawab Likha Hai Aapne...

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob!!!!!

Har Ek As'haar Apni Chaap Chohdta Hua..

Bhaut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khwaish dost,
Apka comment hamesha bahaut khushi deta hai..
Teh teh dil se shukriya apka..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: December 23, 2011, 09:25:25 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

waaaaaaah waaaah waaaaah
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«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2011, 06:54:22 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah kia baat hai janab.. bahut khub aur dilfareb ashaar kahe
haiN aapne... Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe..

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khudaa hafez.. Usual Smile   



‘mat karo guroor itna ae insaanon, akhir yahin ana hai’,
Har lamhe main, har kabrastan bas yehi chhikta hai..

Umeed na rakhna meri nazmon main shayaron wali ada ki,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas jazbaton ko lavzon main dubo kay likhta hai..

These couplet's of thought's are master stroke..Usual Smile
ammazing though's and nicely expression..  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   
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