~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

injured.warrior

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«Reply #15 on: December 23, 2011, 07:19:12 PM »

Bahut Umda Ekdum sach..Bahut Asar. Clapping Smiley

.hazaaro daad aapko


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #16 on: December 23, 2011, 07:23:18 PM »

Quote from: mann.mann on December 23, 2011, 09:25:25 AM

waaaaaaah waaaah waaaaah

Mann.mann jee, teh teh dil se shukriya apka..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #17 on: December 23, 2011, 07:33:35 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 23, 2011, 06:54:22 PM

Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah kia baat hai janab.. bahut khub aur dilfareb ashaar kahe
haiN aapne... Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe..

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khudaa hafez..

‘mat karo guroor itna ae insaanon, akhir yahin ana hai’,
Har lamhe main, har kabrastan bas yehi chhikta hai..

Umeed na rakhna meri nazmon main shayaron wali ada ki,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas jazbaton ko lavzon main dubo kay likhta hai..

These couplet's of thought's are master stroke..
ammazing though's and nicely expression..

Teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz jee..
Apka comment bahaut khushi deta hai..
Bas yunhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #18 on: December 23, 2011, 07:52:52 PM »

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro.. Bahoot hi Gehre Jasbaat aur bahoot umda soch ko pesh kiya hai.. Bahoot hi shandaar !

Good Job !


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #19 on: December 23, 2011, 08:02:31 PM »

Quote from: injured.warrior on December 23, 2011, 07:19:12 PM

Bahut Umda Ekdum sach..Bahut Asar. Clapping Smiley

.hazaaro daad aapko

Teh dil se shukriya dost..
Bas yunhi apna saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #20 on: December 27, 2011, 08:28:43 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on December 22, 2011, 11:15:47 PM

Behad veeran aur sunsan raahein hai zindagi ki,
Na koi saath hai, na dhoor dhoor tak, koi dikhta hai..

Jo gumta hai labon par muskaan liye dinn bhar,
Raaton main kisi kone baith, woh bhi sisakta hai..

Imaan chahe shabnaam jitna pak ho kisi insaan ka,
Apne parivar kay pet kay agey, woh bhi bikta hai..

‘mat karo guroor itna ae insaanon, akhir yahin ana hai’,
Har lamhe main, har kabrastan bas yehi chhikta hai..

Umeed na rakhna meri nazmon main shayaron wali ada ki,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas jazbaton ko lavzon main dubo kay likhta hai..

Behad veeran aur sunsan raahein hai zindagi ki,
Na koi saath hai, na dhoor dhoor tak, koi dikhta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #21 on: December 28, 2011, 04:43:04 AM »

Quote from: Nysha on December 23, 2011, 07:52:52 PM

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro.. Bahoot hi Gehre Jasbaat aur bahoot umda soch ko pesh kiya hai.. Bahoot hi shandaar !

Good Job !

Teh teh dil se shukriya Divya di..
Bas yunhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #22 on: December 28, 2011, 04:43:55 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on December 27, 2011, 08:28:43 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause

Teh teh dil se shukriya Adil jee..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!


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