**Kuch Khwahishein Meri** by Rahim

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Shandar gadiyon main gumne ki tamana rakta hoon,
Aukad meri sadkon pe bhatakne ki hai,
Ek dinn asmaan ki bulandion ko choona chahta hoon,
Aadat meri zameen par sambhalne ki hai,
Zindagi main mujhe bahaut kuch hasil karna hai…

Maa baap ne bahaut kiya hai mere liye,
Ab unke liye kuch karke dikhana chahta hoon,
Maut ek dinn sabko apni agosh main le legi,
Us’se pehle apna ek naam bana na chahta hoon,
Mujhe saalon yaad kare log; aisi ek yaad de jana chahta hoon…

Sab khareeb aur paa sakoun; yeh khwahish meri bhi hai,
Par sachai hai ke ‘Rahim’ ab tak khote aya hai,
Kabhi  dost toh kabhi apna pyaar; kuch na mila,
Ab toh aadat si hai khwahishon ko dafnane ki,
Bas ek baar zindagi main; sachi mohobat pana chahta hoon…

Pata nahin kya darshane ki koshish ki hai maine yeh nazm main,
Bas dil ke kuch dabe ehsaason ko sameta hai maine,
Wakei ab zameen pe rehna pasand nahin mujhe,
Asmaan ko choo sakoun; aisi aukad bhi nahin,
Kehte hai  pana chaho toh sab mil sakta hai,
Ae Khuda mujhe uski mohobat chahiye,
Ya Rabb mujhe apna who dildar chahiye,
Ya Mowla mujhe apni ek pehchan chahiye,
Yakeen hai kar lunga sab hasil ager zinda raha toh,
Bas mujhe mere Allah ka saath chahiye…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 10:45:38 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim bhai ... bahut khoob....!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapne bahut hi khoobsurti se apne khwaishon ko bataya hai. Aur unke poore na hone k dard ko bhi bakhoobi bataya hai aapne. Bahut dard hai aapke kalam me. Shabdo ko ehsaason me baandhna koi aapse sikhe. "Allah" sabse bada hota hai , usse badkar koi nahi. Aur wo apne chahne waalo k sar se kabhi apna haath nahi uthaate. Haan unke ghar der jarur ho sakti hai par andher nahi. Aapki saari khwaishen jaroor poori hongi. Hamari duwa hai ye. Sachchi mohabbat bhi milegi aapko aur aasmaan ki bulandiyon ko bhi chhu lenge aap . Wo din dur nahi Rahim bhai. Wo din dur nahi. Hamari har duwa aapke liye hai aapke saath hai.

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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 10:48:42 PM »
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Bahaut shukriya Kapil dost..Haan aj kal har kalam main dard hi dard hai mere...aur haan hum toh bas shabd saath mila dete hai...koi humse kya seekhega...hum toh khud seekh rahe hai...apka bahaut shukriya Dost...bahaut sara saath dene ka...Ap hamesha khush rahiye..Rahim ki dil ki gehrayion se dua hai...dil ki gehrayion se..
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2010, 10:52:44 PM »
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Pareshaan na ho Rahim bhai ... aapka dard jald hi dur hoga...!!!

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Bahaut shukriya Kapil dost..Haan aj kal har kalam main dard hi dard hai mere...aur haan hum toh bas shabd saath mila dete hai...koi humse kya seekhega...hum toh khud seekh rahe hai...apka bahaut shukriya Dost...bahaut sara saath dene ka...Ap hamesha khush rahiye..Rahim ki dil ki gehrayion se dua hai...dil ki gehrayion se..
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2010, 10:53:41 PM »
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InshAllah!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2010, 10:17:21 AM »
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Behtrin Rahim ji.....khuda aapki har khwaish ko poora kare..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2010, 10:53:11 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim..

bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2010, 11:42:48 AM »
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Wah wah Rahim bhai.very touching and great creation.meri duaa hai aapke sab khwaishein zaroor poora hoga. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2010, 06:41:14 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhu di, Nikhaar jee aur Khwahish jee..
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2010, 12:46:43 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 10:26:47 PM
Shandar gadiyon main gumne ki tamana rakta hoon,
Aukad meri sadkon pe bhatakne ki hai,
Ek dinn asmaan ki bulandion ko choona chahta hoon,
Aadat meri zameen par sambhalne ki hai,
Zindagi main mujhe bahaut kuch hasil karna hai…

Maa baap ne bahaut kiya hai mere liye,
Ab unke liye kuch karke dikhana chahta hoon,
Maut ek dinn sabko apni agosh main le legi,
Us’se pehle apna ek naam bana na chahta hoon,
Mujhe saalon yaad kare log; aisi ek yaad de jana chahta hoon…

Sab khareeb aur paa sakoun; yeh khwahish meri bhi hai,
Par sachai hai ke ‘Rahim’ ab tak khote aya hai,
Kabhi  dost toh kabhi apna pyaar; kuch na mila,
Ab toh aadat si hai khwahishon ko dafnane ki,
Bas ek baar zindagi main; sachi mohobat pana chahta hoon…

Pata nahin kya darshane ki koshish ki hai maine yeh nazm main,
Bas dil ke kuch dabe ehsaason ko sameta hai maine,
Wakei ab zameen pe rehna pasand nahin mujhe,
Asmaan ko choo sakoun; aisi aukad bhi nahin,
Kehte hai  pana chaho toh sab mil sakta hai,
Ae Khuda mujhe uski mohobat chahiye,
Ya Rabb mujhe apna who dildar chahiye,
Ya Mowla mujhe apni ek pehchan chahiye,
Yakeen hai kar lunga sab hasil ager zinda raha toh,
Bas mujhe mere Allah ka saath chahiye…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2010, 12:50:48 PM »
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bahut achhi hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2010, 07:15:38 PM »
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Shukriya Suresh jee...
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2010, 11:43:43 PM »
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very touching!!!!!!!!!!
God Bless u.....
Be alwyz Positive & God vll fulfill all ur desires....
Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 10:26:47 PM
Shandar gadiyon main gumne ki tamana rakta hoon,
Aukad meri sadkon pe bhatakne ki hai,
Ek dinn asmaan ki bulandion ko choona chahta hoon,
Aadat meri zameen par sambhalne ki hai,
Zindagi main mujhe bahaut kuch hasil karna hai…

Maa baap ne bahaut kiya hai mere liye,
Ab unke liye kuch karke dikhana chahta hoon,
Maut ek dinn sabko apni agosh main le legi,
Us’se pehle apna ek naam bana na chahta hoon,
Mujhe saalon yaad kare log; aisi ek yaad de jana chahta hoon…

Sab khareeb aur paa sakoun; yeh khwahish meri bhi hai,
Par sachai hai ke ‘Rahim’ ab tak khote aya hai,
Kabhi  dost toh kabhi apna pyaar; kuch na mila,
Ab toh aadat si hai khwahishon ko dafnane ki,
Bas ek baar zindagi main; sachi mohobat pana chahta hoon…

Pata nahin kya darshane ki koshish ki hai maine yeh nazm main,
Bas dil ke kuch dabe ehsaason ko sameta hai maine,
Wakei ab zameen pe rehna pasand nahin mujhe,
Asmaan ko choo sakoun; aisi aukad bhi nahin,
Kehte hai  pana chaho toh sab mil sakta hai,
Ae Khuda mujhe uski mohobat chahiye,
Ya Rabb mujhe apna who dildar chahiye,
Ya Mowla mujhe apni ek pehchan chahiye,
Yakeen hai kar lunga sab hasil ager zinda raha toh,
Bas mujhe mere Allah ka saath chahiye…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2010, 11:52:50 AM »
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Shukriya Neel jee...
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2010, 12:56:52 PM »
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Bahut hi umda rahim ji...koi alfaz samjh nhi aa raha jisse tarif kar saku..aapki har lekhi mein main apne dard ka ehsasss zarur paati hu...bahut bahut shukriya ye nazm likhne k liye...

Sab khareeb aur paa sakoun; yeh khwahish meri bhi hai,
Par sachai hai ke ‘Rahim’ ab tak khote aya hai,
Kabhi  dost toh kabhi apna pyaar; kuch na mila,
Ab toh aadat si hai khwahishon ko dafnane ki,
Bas ek baar zindagi main; sachi mohobat pana chahta hoon…...

APKA YE PARAGRAPH BAHUT HI LAJAWAB LAGA...INSAAN SIRRF RUPAYE AUR DAULAT SE HI AMEER NHI BANTA...ASLI AMEER WAHI HAI JISKE PAAS SACHI MHBT HO...
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