kuch naya likhu.............

by kaushikbhawna008 on February 14, 2015, 07:46:00 AM
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Kuch naya likhu ye iradaa tha
batenge khushi ye khud se wada tha

Zameen par rehkar paa lenge aasma
Yu hawaa me hath ko uchalaa bhi tha

Neend tute bhale pura karenge armaan
Khwaab dil me kuch aisa pala tha

Mushkilo se jab kar rahe the gujar
honslo se khud ko sambhala sa tha

Socha tha likhenge kuch naya dosto
par waqt ne fir uljhaya sa tha

"Bhawna" jab lagi thi bikharne
Fir kalam ne hi mujhe sambhala sa tha
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2015, 11:25:01 AM »
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khub.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2015, 12:15:11 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2015, 12:06:02 AM »
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bahut bahut umdah, dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2015, 06:46:25 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Bhawna ji, aapki kahaani kuch apni si lagti hai....!!!
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