Kuch Nazmen . . .

by Arghya on June 01, 2013, 02:00:15 PM
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 Socha tha Cod dun dunya kai bar,
 mujhe roka harbar teri deeda-e-taar.

 Wapas ayee sada meri deewaron se takrake,
 kaun jeeta hain nakamiyon se nata jodke.

 Kal raat huii thi barish uski inayet ki,
 sabera hone par reh gayee nishanee pyaar ki.
 
 Zulm-e-zulmat kya hain jana firaq mein hum,
 aankhon mein nami aur dur hain humdum.
 
 Bepeer kya jane ishq kya cheez hain,
 sitam to uska jeene ka sahara hain.

 Aye khuda meri manzil ko kareeb laade,
 ya phir mujhe is dunya ki chahat banade.

 Teri bedili ka asar mujh pe der se hua,
 rafta rafta yeh dil ashkon mein dub gaya.
 
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2013, 02:29:13 PM »
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aapki pehli ki sabhi kosisshoN se kaafi behtar hai ye, padh kar ahcha laga, bas yuNhi mashq zaari rakheN.... aur likhti raheN...
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2013, 02:45:14 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2013, 03:35:30 PM »
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nyc thoughts,...............
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2013, 06:06:02 PM »
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Wonderful.
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2013, 07:43:58 PM »
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achcha likha hai aapne.. likhte rahiye..
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nice..happy9
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