-----/// Kuch palon kaa saath baaki hai ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on March 22, 2013, 09:51:32 PM
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tumse    karne     ko    abhi    kuch   aur  baat   baaki  hai
judaa  hone   se  pehle   aakhri   mulaquaat    baaki    hai

maaloom   hai  humein judaa honaa hai kuch palon mein
magar ab bhi  hamaaraa  kuch palon kaa saath baaki hai

aao baitho hamaare saamne  ki dekh  len  tumhe thik se
chali   jaanaa    tum  ,  abhi   to   poori    raat  baaki  hai

woh gulaab jo tumne  diyaa  thaa  pehli mulaquaat mein
sukh gayaa, magar ab bhi usme woh   jasbaat  baaki  hai

naa karo majboor ki ro den hum tumhaare jaane se pehle
chhipaa  lenge aansoo,   abhi to  honi   barsaat baaki hai


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«Reply #1 on: March 22, 2013, 10:29:51 PM »
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tumse    karne    ko    abhi    kuch   aur  baat   baaki  hai
judaa  hone   se  pehle   aakhri   mulaquaat    baaki    hai

maaloom   hai  humein judaa honaa hai kuch palon mein
magar ab bhi  hamaaraa  kuch palon kaa saath baaki hai

aao baitho hamaare saamne  ki dekh  len  tumhe thik se
chali   jaanaa    tum  ,  abhi   to   poori    raat  baaki  hai

woh gulaab jo tumne  diyaa  thaa  pehli mulaquaat mein
sukh gayaa, magar ab bhi usme woh   jasbaat  baaki  hai

naa karo majboor ki ro de hum tumhaare  jaane se pehle
chhipaa  lenge aansoo,   abhi to  honi   barsaat baaki hai


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waaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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Waaaaaaaah Waaaaaaaah HARIDAY g buht hi khoob Buht hi umdaaa
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2013, 10:44:07 PM »
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tumse    karne    ko    abhi    kuch   aur  baat   baaki  hai
judaa  hone   se  pehle   aakhri   mulaquaat    baaki    hai

maaloom   hai  humein judaa honaa hai kuch palon mein
magar ab bhi  hamaaraa  kuch palon kaa saath baaki hai

aao baitho hamaare saamne  ki dekh  len  tumhe thik se
chali   jaanaa    tum  ,  abhi   to   poori    raat  baaki  hai

woh gulaab jo tumne  diyaa  thaa  pehli mulaquaat mein
sukh gayaa, magar ab bhi usme woh   jasbaat  baaki  hai

naa karo majboor ki ro de hum tumhaare  jaane se pehle
chhipaa  lenge aansoo,   abhi to  honi   barsaat baaki hai


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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khooooooob!!!!!!

Har Ek Ashaar lajawaab!!!!

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Bahut bahut bahut khoob hriday ji. bahut khoob aapne likha hai. bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh ghazal. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2013, 11:15:31 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2013, 01:22:26 AM »
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"juda hone se pehle  akhri mulaqaat baaki hai.."
kya mast line likhi hai aapne...
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2013, 01:51:06 AM »
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WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad khoob kalaam kahi hai janab...
har ashaar ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Aik master stroke lagayaa hai is kalaam se .. waqai behad umdaa
kalaam kahi hai.. Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabui kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Adil ji.....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Ambalika ji.....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Farhan ji.....!!!

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Waaaaaaaah Waaaaaaaah HARIDAY g buht hi khoob Buht hi umdaaa
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tumse    karne     ko    abhi    kuch   aur  baat   baaki  hai
judaa  hone   se  pehle   aakhri   mulaquaat    baaki    hai

Kya khoob likha hai hriday jee
rula gayee aapki likhi ye lines.
ye bedard zamana.
duaa ke liye uthne vaale haath..pal bhar me rukh badal lete hai.
aansuu pochne vaale haath bhi ..hamesh apne nahee hote..
insaan ki keemat mitti ke barabar hai..
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 22, 2013, 09:51:32 PM


tumse    karne     ko    abhi    kuch   aur  baat   baaki  hai
judaa  hone   se  pehle   aakhri   mulaquaat    baaki    hai

maaloom   hai  humein judaa honaa hai kuch palon mein
magar ab bhi  hamaaraa  kuch palon kaa saath baaki hai

aao baitho hamaare saamne  ki dekh  len  tumhe thik se
chali   jaanaa    tum  ,  abhi   to   poori    raat  baaki  hai

woh gulaab jo tumne  diyaa  thaa  pehli mulaquaat mein
sukh gayaa, magar ab bhi usme woh   jasbaat  baaki  hai

naa karo majboor ki ro den hum tumhaare jaane se pehle
chhipaa  lenge aansoo,   abhi to  honi   barsaat baaki hai


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waah hirday ji khubsurat ghazal ,..........bohat c daad,.....
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