kuch toote makaan reh jaenge

by ahilya on October 18, 2013, 10:24:59 AM
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Tham jaega yeh toofan chnd palon mai
Peeche gawahi dene ko kuch toote makaan reh jaenge

Jo chhod denge apni udanon ko parinde
To bahut soone ye aasman reh jaenge

Agar badal liye raaste musafiron se
Phir manzilon ke baaki kya kaam reh jaenge

Raat guzar jaegi leke khwabon ka chirag
Bas shabnam mai bheege kuch armaan reh jaenge
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2013, 11:26:09 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2013, 11:31:24 AM »
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waah waah  superb lines ahliya ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 12:02:46 PM »
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v.nice lines
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 01:10:48 PM »
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waah Ahilya ji waah, jitne khoobsoorat jasbaat utni hi khoobsoorat bayaani, bahut bahut khoob...!!!

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Bahut khoooooob...
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2013, 01:56:55 AM »
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Tham jaega yeh toofan chnd palon mai
Peeche gawahi dene ko kuch toote makaan reh jaenge

Jo chhod denge apni udanon ko parinde
To bahut soone ye aasman reh jaenge Applause Applause wah wah wah

Agar badal liye raaste musafiron se
Phir manzilon ke baaki kya kaam reh jaenge

Raat guzar jaegi leke khwabon ka chirag
Bas shabnam mai bheege kuch armaan reh jaenge

Bahut khoob ahilya jee
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2013, 02:27:01 AM »
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Laajawab.!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2013, 09:36:57 AM »
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bahut khoob
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