kuch tu hi bata...

by chandniverma86@yahoo.com on February 09, 2012, 08:30:10 AM
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Ae moj-e-hawa kuch tu hi bata
wo dost humara kaisa hai ?

jo bhool chuka hai kab se hume
wo jaan se pyara kaisa hai ?

kya us ke jeevan lamhon mai
koi lamha mera baki hai ?

kya usko chandni raaton mai
ab bhi yaad humari  aati hai ?

gar aisa nahi hai to tu hi bata
hum yaad usay kyun karte hain ?

wo hum se bichar kar khush hai agar
to pal pal hum kyun marte hain....?
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2012, 09:12:56 AM »
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Kya baat hai..Bahut khoob
Sundar ehsaas-o-khayaal se doobi is peshkash par Daad haajir hai.
likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2012, 09:24:49 AM »
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Bahut sunder khyaalaat hain chandni ji aap ghazal kahne kee koshish karen aap men hunar saaf jhalak rahaa hai.khush raho
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2012, 09:28:04 AM »
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Quote from: chandniverma86@yahoo.com on February 09, 2012, 08:30:10 AM
Ae moj-e-hawa kuch tu hi bata
wo dost humara kaisa hai ?

jo bhool chuka hai kab se hume
wo jaan se pyara kaisa hai ?

kya us ke jeevan lamhon mai
koi lamha mera baki hai ?

kya usko chandni raaton mai
ab bhi yaad humari  aati hai ?

gar aisa nahi hai to tu hi bata
hum yaad usay kyun karte hain ?

wo hum se bichar kar khush hai agar
to pal pal hum kyun marte hain....?


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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2012, 09:45:16 AM »
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Bahut Sunder Gungunati hui peskash Chandni ji Bahut Bahut mubarak Apko Keep Writing ..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2012, 03:38:33 PM »
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baht khoob
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2012, 03:58:39 PM »
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Aadaab janab!

Bahut khoob janab, behad khoobsurat ahsaas o
khayaal aur umda andaaz e bayaaN... Usual Smile

Kafi umdaa kalaam se aapne entry ki hai... aapka
YO INDIA ki khoobsurat mehfil meiN tah e dil
se swagat hai... Usual Smile

Ummid hai aapse aise hi khoob kalaamoN se hume
ru ba ru hone ka mouka milta raheNga... Usual Smile

likhte rahiye... aate rahiye
khush o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2012, 01:39:09 AM »
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kya baat hai. this is really nice.
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