kuchh dohe......mann

by mann.mann on October 25, 2014, 07:13:45 AM
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Kone kone dwar dwar par deep jalaye kya bhaya.
Kaisi ye diwali hai jab mann hi roushan na bhaya.

Gale mile tohfe diye gaya na mann ka bair,
Aise kyon ham ho gaye ki apne lagte gair.

Laakh mitaya na mita aisa mann ka marz,
Rishta hai har ek se par sabse milta dard.

Roji  ki  majburi  hai ye  jo  kar  gayi itni  door,
Warna iss tyouhar main ham tumse milte zaroor.

Duniyan  sari  badal  gayi  mite  jog  sanjog,
Kitna chahe mann hi mann par milna pate log.

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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2014, 07:44:12 AM »
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Kone kone dwar dwar par deep jalaye kya bhaya.
Kaisi ye diwali hai jab mann hi roushan na bhaya.

Gale mile tohfe diye gaya na mann ka bair,
Aise kyon ham ho gaye ki apne lagte gair.

Laakh mitaya na mita aisa mann ka marz,
Rishta hai har ek se par sabse milta dard.

Roji  ki  majburi  hai ye  jo  kar  gayi itni  door,
Warna iss tyouhar main ham tumsr milte zaroor.

Duniyan  sari  badal  gayi  mite  jog  sanjog,
Kitna chahe mann hi mann par milna pate log.

Mann  


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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2014, 09:13:17 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2014, 09:20:07 AM »
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Sachchi baat Mann ji !! Bahaut khoob !!
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2014, 12:51:12 PM »
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बहुत खूब......
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2014, 05:46:48 AM »
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bahut shukriya sagarji....
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2014, 11:30:45 AM »
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bahut shukriya kumaarji
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2014, 04:37:54 PM »
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Mann Sahib nihaayat hee khoobsurat qalaam hai Janaab, dheron daad.
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Main ne ek dohe kaa izaafaa kiyaa hai, aapkee braabaree to nahin kar saktaa, phir bhi neeche daraj kiyaa hai.

Roji  ki  majburi  hai ye  jo  kar  gayi itni  door,
Warna iss tyouhar main ham tumse milte zaroor.

Yeh to hai main door thaa par itnaa naa thaa door,
Jashan keeyo main.ne bhi thaa terii yaad se bharpoor.

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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2014, 07:45:58 AM »
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bahut shukriya zarraji.....
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«Reply #10 on: November 06, 2014, 11:42:05 AM »
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bahut shukriya sainiji.....
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«Reply #11 on: November 10, 2014, 10:03:13 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2014, 10:09:30 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on October 25, 2014, 07:13:45 AM
Kone kone dwar dwar par deep jalaye kya bhaya.
Kaisi ye diwali hai jab mann hi roushan na bhaya.

Gale mile tohfe diye gaya na mann ka bair,
Aise kyon ham ho gaye ki apne lagte gair.

Laakh mitaya na mita aisa mann ka marz,
Rishta hai har ek se par sabse milta dard.

Roji  ki  majburi  hai ye  jo  kar  gayi itni  door,
Warna iss tyouhar main ham tumse milte zaroor.

Duniyan  sari  badal  gayi  mite  jog  sanjog,
Kitna chahe mann hi mann par milna pate log.

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«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2014, 10:09:53 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya surindranji.....

aapne bahut acha doha kaha hai..... bahut khushi hui ki aapne padha aur itna socha......

shukriya.......
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«Reply #14 on: November 12, 2014, 07:38:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shebaji....

ji agar aap bata detin ki kon se shabd aapko samjh nahin aaye to ham aapko bata dete.....par fir bhi jo hame lagta hai aapko bata dete hain.....

dwar- darwaza
bhaya- hua
bair- dushmani
roji- rojgar, job
jog sanjog- kismat, honi anhoni

iske alawa bhi kuch hon to bataiye....
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