kuchh to ho haasil e taqdeer Qadeer...........................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on February 20, 2012, 05:45:40 PM
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Nazr e Qadeer Saaheb..........

Aap kee pichhali koshish ke silsile me meri ek chhoti see koshish......


Kuchh to ho haasil e taqdeer Qadeer
khaayeNge aur kitane teer Qader

aur kuchh bhee naa humne chaahaa thaa
bas sukooN aur dil fakeer Qadeer

khud kee nazaron se gir naa jaayeN kaheeN
jaagtaa hai abhee zameer Qadeer

koshishen wasl kee tamaam huyeeN
hai amit dard kee lakeer Qadeer

har ghadee har taraf jidhar dekho
aadamee ho rahaa haqeer Qadeer

hai alag tu bayaaN hai teraa judaa
miltee aisee nahee nazeer Qadeer

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2012, 05:48:38 PM »
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..good
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2012, 06:09:20 PM »
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Nice, bahut acchaa likha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2012, 04:00:18 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2012, 08:14:23 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Bahut khoob...kya kahne..

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2012, 09:48:31 AM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!


Mohtarma waah kia kahne aapke.. jawaaban behad pyaari gazal
kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Waqai sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur umdaa rahe.. Usual Smile
Is khoobsurat dour ke silsile ko shuru karne ke liye...

Hum aap dono ko salaam pesh karte haiN... Usual Smile
Sawaal pe sawaal aur jawaab bus lajawaab .....  Applause Applause Applause


Is umdaa kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...
Aur aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye... Usual Smile

HaaN aapke is kalaam ke aik sher meiN kuch tarmeem karni lazeem si
nazar aayi so hum aapko bataa raheN hai..

har ghadee har kaheeN jidhar dekho
aadamee ho rahaa haqeer Qadeer


Ulaa misre meiN har kaheeN kuch na munaaseeb sa lag raha hai... uski
jagaaH har taraf meiN badal dijiye.. shayad kuch munaseebat ban jaaye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khudaa Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2012, 02:56:33 PM »
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 :clap Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2012, 09:10:05 AM »
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mamta ji bahut sunder likha hai daaaaad hazir hai.
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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2012, 05:50:12 AM »
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Sukriyaa Saahill!
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2012, 08:31:39 AM »
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"Kuchh to ho haasil e taqdeer Qadeer
 khaayeNge aur kitane teer Qader

 aur kuchh bhee naa humne chaahaa thaa
 bas sukooN aur dil fakeer Qadeer

 khud kee nazaron se gir naa jaayeN kaheeN
 jaagtaa hai abhee zameer Qadeer
 
 koshishen wasl kee tamaam huyeeN
 hai amit dard kee lakeer Qadeer

 har ghadee har taraf jidhar dekho
 aadamee ho rahaa haqeer Qadeer

 hai alag tu bayaaN hai teraa judaa
 miltee aisee nahee nazeer Qadeer"
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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-अरुण मिश्र.
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