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anokhiladli uzma
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2011, 05:04:22 PM » |
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good vb g but if it is not ur's then why it has ur name in it? some one wrote it for u?
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2011, 05:12:06 PM » |
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hmmmmmmm........good 1 VB ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2011, 05:29:39 PM » |
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very good poem....thanks for sharing.....VB ji
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anokhiladli uzma
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2011, 05:40:57 PM » |
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un k saray lafzon say jo bhee bherm ta toot gaya
wo apna app dikha baithay or to koi bat nahee
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anokhiladli uzma
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2011, 06:55:05 PM » |
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tootay ger kuch dahgay to umeedain phir bundh jain gee
rishtoon ka anokha bundhen hay akhir us ko jurna hay
armano ko rait na samjhoo toot k na wo bikhrain gay
bus kuch lamhon ki dairi hay khuab to poora hona hay
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anokhiladli uzma
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2011, 06:59:12 PM » |
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chahay kuch bhee kerlo jana jo apnay hain wo laotain gay
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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2011, 07:20:53 PM » |
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toote riste kab judte hain
jud jaaye to gatth padte hain
jo sachche riste hote
na yun fir toota karte
aankho ki kirchan se fir
dil ke lahoo na risaa karte
sach hi kaha kuch toot gaya hai vb jee
koi khaab adhoora chhoot gaya hai vb jee
seeney ka bhi toota hai
aankho ka bhi toota hai
maan bhi jao uzma ji
kuch toot gaya hai uzma ji
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anokhiladli uzma
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2011, 07:49:00 PM » |
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jo choot chuka wo kub apna
jo toot chuka wo kub apna
jo apna hay na chootay ga
bus thora so wo rothay ga
kuch thora sa rolay ga
or thora wo satay ga
akhir ko phir muskay ga
laot k tum tak aay ga
k apna akhir apna hay
apna akhir apna hay
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2011, 08:38:05 PM » |
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jo bikhra raha barson pehlay
uski dharkan bhi maddham hay
usay aadat hay khamoshi kee
chahay harsu shorr ke sargam hay
jinki umeedein toot chukeen
ab unka phir say jurna kya
yeh jeevan ajab paheli hay
kati patang ne urhana kya
sach kehtay hain, jahaan ke mele main
itena asaan nahin jeena marna,
mil jaaye bina jo sajday ke
uska mil ke bhi milna kya
mushkil hoti hay bayan-e-uljhan
asaan hay aanso.on ka beh jaana
jo dhundlahat mein chhup baitha ho
chhoro us khwaab mein beh jaana
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2011, 02:26:09 PM » |
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ankho se bahte jatey hain
zazbaato se khel wo jatey hain
dil ko bahot tarpatey hain
ghaw kuch aisa lagaatey hain
khurach khurach kar fir ghawon ko
ruh ko bhi jalatey hain
kya maa baap kya bhai bahan kya yar dost
waqt pare sab chor jatey hain
kisse umeed lagaye hum
kaun apna kahlatey hain
jag ki shayd reet yahi
pyar ke do bole nahi sirf dhokhe hi nibhatey hain
wo aaj gaya mai jaunga
fir bhi zism se hi dil behlatey hain
ye murkho ki duniya hai
nasamajh yaha sb buddhimaan kahlaatey hain
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anokhiladli uzma
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2011, 05:18:21 PM » |
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yan koi kisi ka meet nahee duniya ka yahee dastoor hoa
phir dill keon rog laga baitha is karan keon ranjoor hoa
na moat tairi na zeest tairi na har tairi na jeet tairi
mati k putlay bol zara kis bat pay too majboor hoa
kis kis ka soog manay ga kis kis ka roog lagay ga
is jag ka yahee hay reet sanam yae pass aya wo door hoa
jalnay ko dono jaltay hain taqdeer ka chuker dikho to
perwanay jaly to khak hoy or shama jali to noor hoa
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2011, 05:35:11 PM » |
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dekh na tu khuwab koi
chingari jal kar raakh hui
aansu palak se gire kabi
smjhe sab khusiyo ki barsaat hui
wo tera ye mera karte
dard bhi apna gairo ki khiraat hui
chitt se chamcham ye chitwan
agni ki saugaat hui
koi kahe to jaan bhi de dein
sunn ke badi hairat hui
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vb jee ye thread bahot jada khubsurat aur real hai…
thanx for dis post bhai
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