Kya Dekhun

by Quateel Ahmad on April 17, 2012, 07:14:13 AM
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Apne ghamon ko aksar samet'ta hoon,
Kabhi tumko kabhi apne shehar ko dekhta hoon,

joshili leher ka pathrilay sahil par tootna
halaat ka armanon pe asar dekhta hoon

is sheher ne mere sapne cheene hain
aaj iski bari hai, main ise kal dekhta hoon

chamakte sheeshon se lipti imaraton mein
dhundli aankhe gande zehen dekhta hoon

har shakal per dekhoon aalam e bad havaasi,
aajkal aina main kam dekhta hoon
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2012, 07:15:37 AM »
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waah qaateel saheb bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2012, 09:05:56 AM »
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Apne ghamon ko aksar samet'ta hoon,
Kabhi tumko kabhi apne shehar ko dekhta hoon,

joshili leher ka pathrilay sahil par tootna
halaat ka armanon pe asar dekhta hoon

is sheher ne mere sapne cheene hain
aaj iski bari hai, main ise kal dekhta hoon

chamakte sheeshon se lipti imaraton mein
dhundli aankhe gande zehen dekhta hoon

har shakal per dekhoon aalam e bad havaasi,
aajkal aina main kam dekhta hoon


Waah waah Quateel Ji..

Bahut bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2012, 11:50:36 AM »
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Bahut Shukriya Saini Bhai!
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2012, 11:51:01 AM »
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Bahut Shukriya Khwaishji!
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2012, 12:00:58 PM »
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Apne ghamon ko aksar samet'ta hoon,
Kabhi tumko kabhi apne shehar ko dekhta hoon,

joshili leher ka pathrilay sahil par tootna
halaat ka armanon pe asar dekhta hoon

is sheher ne mere sapne cheene hain
aaj iski bari hai, main ise kal dekhta hoon

chamakte sheeshon se lipti imaraton mein
dhundli aankhe gande zehen dekhta hoon

har shakal per dekhoon aalam e bad havaasi,
aajkal aina main kam dekhta hoon

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2012, 12:08:07 PM »
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Waah Qateel sahab. Bhaut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2012, 12:13:45 PM »
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bahut khoob Quateel Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2012, 12:17:04 PM »
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Bahut Shukriya Qalb sahab
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2012, 12:19:22 PM »
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Shukriya Anahitaji...Shukriya Amit ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2012, 08:38:46 PM »
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Apne ghamon ko aksar samet'ta hoon,
Kabhi tumko kabhi apne shehar ko dekhta hoon,
maine to kahaa thaa main apne maa baap ke khelaaf nahin jaao.n gi. tum unse baat karo. aur tum ne kahaa nahin . to ab meri shaadi kahin aur hone lagi to gham bhare kalaam nikalne lage. kisne kahaa shahar chorne ke liye. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
joshili leher ka pathrilay sahil par tootna
halaat ka armanon pe asar dekhta hoon
apni koshish karne se parhez karo aur maamla sirf aur sirf halaat pe chorana sahi nahin.ladd ka haarna kahin acha youn hatiyaar daal dene se. samjhe
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is sheher ne mere sapne cheene hain
aaj iski bari hai, main ise kal dekhta hoon
kuch nahin hone wala. sapne dekhna mat choro ji. yehi zindagi ko aage badhne mein madad dete hain. aur haan sapna koi chcheen nahin sakta ye to khyaalo.n mein baste hain aur waqt ke saat ye bhi rang badalte hain ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
chamakte sheeshon se lipti imaraton mein
dhundli aankhe gande zehen dekhta hoon
sahi hai per zaruri nahin Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
har shakal per dekhoon aalam e bad havaasi,
aajkal aina main kam dekhta hoon
bhaag daur ki zindagi hai. kya karo ge abb.her zimmadaari nibhaani hai iss choti si zindagi mein. asal baat ye hai insaan bahut besabra ho chuka hai. khawaab bade hain aur haasil karnne ka jazba sageer hai.

khoob kahaa aapne quateel.....!
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2012, 07:00:25 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2012, 05:28:20 AM »
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Bahot Shukriya Shebaji!
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Bahot Shukriya Hridayji
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Wah wah Qateel sahab bahot achhi peshkash hai. Parhkar bahot achha laga.
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