Kya Insaan ka Khoon Aaj Itna Sasta Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:41:18 AM
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Naa jaane Kyon Iss Baat Par itna Charcha Hai
Khuda Ka Ghar Banane Walo,Khuda To insaan ke ANdar basta Hai..

Meri Diwali Tum manao, Tumhari Eid Main Manau
Khuda To sab Ka ek Hai,Ussi Ke Aage Hum Sab Ka Sar Jhukta Hai...

Bhaut Hua Yeh nafrat ka Khel Yaaron...!!
Sach To Yeh hai Ke Yahan Insaan Hi Insaan Se Darta hai..

Aaj Hum Jo beech Bo rahe Hai Kal Issi ka Fal Humare Bache Khayenge
Inn beetuki Baaton par Agar Khoon Bahe To Socho
Kya Insaan Ka Khoon Aaj Itna Sasta hai

Jinhe Jo Raajneeti Rachni hai Woh To rachenge Hi,
Par inn Sab mein Ek Bechara be-kasoor Hi yahan marta Hai...

Har insaan Ki Apni-Apni Zaroorate Hai!!!
Koi Aakar dekhe Ek Gareeb Do Roti Ke Liye,
Kin Hallaton Se Chal Guzarta Hai...

"Khwaish" Agar Hum sab Ek ho To Kuch Baat Bane
Sacha Insaan Har Buraai Se lad sakta Hai...

Khuda To Insaan Ke Andar basta Hai

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2010, 09:49:34 AM »
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bahut khoob kaha khwaish bhaiii...
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2010, 09:55:01 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 30, 2010, 09:49:34 AM
bahut khoob kaha khwaish bhaiii...

Abhi Ji kuch Dil Ki baatein thi Jo likh Gya..

bas Khuda Khair kare.... icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2010, 09:56:59 AM »
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ohho khwaish bhai ek bat hamne apki manni na ab aap ye ji lagaye bina sirf Abhi bolo naa~
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2010, 12:10:28 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Aapke ahsaas o khayaal behad achche hai....
Aapne achcha likha hai ... kuch tecniqs hai jin par
aap thoda gaur kareN to aapke kalaam meiN chaar chand
lag jayeNge....

Abhi to aik baat batate chalte hai ke aap lines ko same metter meiN rakhne ki koshish kijiye... line's choti badi na hone dijiye ..
Baki to aapki soch aur lekhani achchi hai....   


Aik achchi koshish per daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye.......
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile       
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 06:14:09 PM »
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ek achhi soch ki khwahish thi wo bhi nazar aaya aur aap bhi Khwaish ji... Shukriya...!
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2010, 09:24:02 PM »
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wah ji wah

Bhut bhut bhut khoob ..........

Keep smiling
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2010, 12:53:39 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2010, 07:37:22 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 30, 2010, 12:10:28 PM
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Aapke ahsaas o khayaal behad achche hai....
Aapne achcha likha hai ... kuch tecniqs hai jin par
aap thoda gaur kareN to aapke kalaam meiN chaar chand
lag jayeNge....

Abhi to aik baat batate chalte hai ke aap lines ko same metter meiN rakhne ki koshish kijiye... line's choti badi na hone dijiye ..
Baki to aapki soch aur lekhani achchi hai....   


Aik achchi koshish per daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye.......
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile       


Shukria Parwaaz Ji, Par Agar Main meter mein likhne Ki Koshish mein rehta To Dil Ke Woh jazbaat Pesh Naa Kar paata Jo kar paaya Hoon.Kabhi-Kabhi insaan Jazbo mein Beh jaata Hai,Aur Khayal nahi rakh Paata..Shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2010, 09:31:18 AM »
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Bahoot acha Khwaish ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2010, 01:21:06 PM »
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Khwaish dost, zindagi aur duniya ki sachayi par apki yeh nazm dil choo gayi..bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob..! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2010, 03:18:40 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 30, 2010, 09:41:18 AM
Naa jaane Kyon Iss Baat Par itna Charcha Hai
Khuda Ka Ghar Banane Walo,Khuda To insaan ke ANdar basta Hai..

Meri Diwali Tum manao, Tumhari Eid Main Manau
Khuda To sab Ka ek Hai,Ussi Ke Aage Hum Sab Ka Sar Jhukta Hai...

Bhaut Hua Yeh nafrat ka Khel "Khwaish"
Sach To Yeh hai Ke Yahan Insaan Hi Insaan Se Darta hai..

Aaj Hum Jo beech Bo rahe Hai Kal Issi ka Fal Humare Bache Khayenge
Inn beetuki Baaton par Agar Khoon Bahe To Socho
Kya Insaan Ka Khoon Aaj Itna Sasta hai

Jinhe Jo Raajneeti Rachni hai Woh To rachenge Hi,
Par inn Sab mein Ek Bechara be-kasoor Hi yahan marta Hai...

Har insaan Ki Apni-Apni Zaroorate Hai!!!
Koi Aakar dekhe Ek Gareeb Do Roti Ke Liye,
Kin Hallaton Se Chal Guzarta Hai...

"Khwaish" Agar Hum sab Ek ho To Kuch Baat Bane
Sacha Insaan Har Buraai Se lad sakta Hai...

Khuda To insaan Ke Andar basta Hai

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
khwaish ,,, boht khob .....aap k is kalam mien sufiana rang hai jo bulhey shah aor kabeer das main tha ..... khosh rahee
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2010, 04:04:47 PM »
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Quote from: Intezar on September 30, 2010, 06:14:09 PM
ek achhi soch ki khwahish thi wo bhi nazar aaya aur aap bhi Khwaish ji... Shukriya...!

Teh Dil Se shukriya intezaar Ji,Shukar hai Khuda Ka Ke Main Aapke Intezaar Mein Khara Utra..bas Yuhi Hausla-Afzaai Karte rahiyega..

bahut Bahut Shukriya Aapka icon_flower
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Quote from: neelgold on September 30, 2010, 09:24:02 PM
wah ji wah

Bhut bhut bhut khoob ..........

Keep smiling


bahut bahut Shukriya Sonaji.. icon_flower
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 01, 2010, 12:53:39 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

Ji Shukriya Aapka
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