Kya Jawab DeiN.!!-------------------"Sagar"

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on February 18, 2014, 06:06:05 PM
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Jaane kyun log milte hi tera  naam lete  hain.!
Shayad is chehare pe likha pehachan lete hain.!!

Bahut chaha humne ke dil-e-dard zubaan na aaye.!
Tamaam koshishon baad bhi hum naqaam hote hain.!!

Zindgee ab jaise bhi kate bus guzar hi jaayegi.!
Phir bhi mere subaha-shaam tere naam hote hain.!!

Kahan ho kaise ho khabar nahin jra bhi humein.!
Kya kahun un ko jo unka pataa maang lete hain.!!

Juda hote palkon mein ek tasweer chod gaye the.!
Sajaya use Man-Mandir mein roz  pooj lete hain.!!





जाने क्यूँ लोग मिलते ही तेरा नाम लेते हैं.!
शायद इस चेहरे पे लिखा पहचान लेते  हैं.!!

बहुत चाहा हमने के दिल-ए-दर्द ज़ुबान ना आए.!
तमाम कोशिशों बाद  भी  हम  नाक़ाम होते हैं.!!

ज़िंदगी अब जैसे भी हो बस गुज़र ही जाएगी.!
फिर भी मेरे सुबहा-शाम तेरे  नाम  होते हैं.!!

कहाँ हो  कैसे हो खबर नहीं जरा  भी  हमें.!
क्या कहूँ उनको जो उनका पता माँग लेते हैं.!!

जुदा होते पलकों में एक तस्वीर छोड़ गये थे.!
सजाया  उसे मन-मंदिर में रोज़ पूज लेते हैं.!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2014, 06:31:26 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2014, 08:23:55 PM »
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बहुत खूब. रवि जी धीरे धीरे आपकी शायरी में पैनापन आ रहा है. आपकी रचना पसंद आयी.
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on February 18, 2014, 06:06:05 PM

Jaane kyun log milte hi tera  naam lete  hain.!
Shayad is chehare pe likha pehachan lete hain.!!

Bahut chaha humne ke dil-e-dard zubaan na aaye.!
Tamaam koshishon baad bhi hum naqaam hote hain.!!

Zindgee ab jaise bhi kate bus guzar hi jaayegi.!
Phir bhi mere subaha-shaam tere naam hote hain.!!

Kahan ho kaise ho khabar nahin jra bhi humein.!
Kya kahun un ko jo unka pataa maang lete hain.!!

Juda hote palkon mein ek tasweer chod gaye the.!
Sajaya use Man-Mandir mein roz  pooj lete hain.!!





जाने क्यूँ लोग मिलते ही तेरा नाम लेते हैं.!
शायद इस चेहरे पे लिखा पहचान लेते  हैं.!!

बहुत चाहा हमने के दिल-ए-दर्द ज़ुबान ना आए.!
तमाम कोशिशों बाद  भी  हम  नाक़ाम होते हैं.!!

ज़िंदगी अब जैसे भी हो बस गुज़र ही जाएगी.!
फिर भी मेरे सुबहा-शाम तेरे  नाम  होते हैं.!!

कहाँ हो  कैसे हो खबर नहीं जरा  भी  हमें.!
क्या कहूँ उनको जो उनका पता माँग लेते हैं.!!

जुदा होते पलकों में एक तस्वीर छोड़ गये थे.!
सजाया  उसे मन-मंदिर में रोज़ पूज लेते हैं.!!
Wha wha wha ravi ji bhut khub
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Quote from: nandbahu on February 18, 2014, 06:31:26 PM
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