~Kya koi mera bhi hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on November 03, 2010, 09:47:19 PM
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Duniya ki iss bheed main ek aks mera bhi hai,
Suraksha karta meri; kisi ki duaon ka pehra bhi hai..

Aj kal ki raftaar ko dekte hue ek sawal hai mann main,
Kya koi yahan apne apnon kay liye, tehra bhi hai..

Haaste chehron ko dekh khud ko badnaseeb na samjhana ‘Khamosh’,
Kabhi na kabhi toh ghum ne usko ghera[surrounding] bhi hai..

Apne ashiq ka intezar karte chehron par tadap dekta hoon main,
Sochta hoon kya issi tarha kisi ko intezar rehta mera bhi hai..

Koi andhere main jee kar bhi muskurana janta hai yaaron,
Toh kahin mehalon main rehne walon kay saar par bechaini ka sehra bhi hai..

Najane aj saansein yeh kaisa chubta sawal puch gayi mujse,
‘Khamosh’, iss duniya ki bheed main, kya koi tera bhi hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2010, 06:00:52 AM »
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Rahim ji bahut khoob aur dil ki gehraiyon se likha hai.mazaa aa gaya.
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2010, 06:13:21 AM »
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bht hi badhiya rahim....dil chhu gaya har ek sher tumhara....
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2010, 06:31:53 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Rahim Mere Bhai.. Har sher Apne Aap me ek gaharaayi Liye Hue Hai.. Daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2010, 10:42:48 AM »
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Shukriya Suresh jee, Anamika di aur Vikas bhaijan..
Dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2010, 11:41:48 AM »
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bAHUT HE JAANDAAR LIKHA HAI AAPNE rAHIM-BHAI.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mAST LIKHTE HO LIKHTE RAHIYE YU HE.......
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2010, 11:45:57 AM »
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Shukriya Koyal di..!
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2010, 03:36:49 AM »
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Nice very gud !! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Kahin na kahin koi tera bhi hoga
Jo sukun de tujhe wo chehra bhi hoga ,
Teri khamosh duniya ko wo kar dega uski hansi se
Roshan wo ek chand sa chehra tera bhi hoga !! happy3 happy3
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2010, 06:22:07 AM »
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bahaut acchee rahim bhai. gehrai se irony aur pathos piroyaa hai kalaam mein.
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«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2010, 09:13:04 AM »
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Shukriya Shihab bhaijan aur Zarra jee..!
Teh dil se shukriya.!
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2010, 09:20:06 AM »
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Quote from: kritika sharma on November 05, 2010, 03:36:49 AM

Nice very gud !! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Kahin na kahin koi tera bhi hoga
Jo sukun de tujhe wo chehra bhi hoga ,
Teri khamosh duniya ko wo kar dega uski hansi se
Roshan wo ek chand sa chehra tera bhi hoga !! happy3 happy3


bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..
Ameen..Kash koi aisa ho..!
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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2010, 09:24:26 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai rahiim ji n nice reply kritika ji...
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2010, 10:02:30 AM »
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Shukriya Geet di.!
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2010, 08:20:24 AM »
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bahut khoob rahim bhaii~
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«Reply #14 on: November 09, 2010, 09:37:37 PM »
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Shukriya Abhi bhaijan..!
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