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by malli on June 02, 2012, 04:47:23 PM
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Jeevan ki pariksha main nahi hote pass kyu?
Chand log lete hai jang main sanyaas kyu?

Banjar zameen aur kadi dhoop ka safar hai
Jahno-dil mein rehta hai madhubhas kyu

Rah mein kuchale huye ki madadth nahi karte
Bheed lagaye hai fir aas-pass kyu?

Kal doosron ke dukh mein rone wale they tum
Aaj aansuwon ka udate ho haasi kyu?

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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2012, 04:54:46 PM »
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wah wah wah ... bahut khoob nazariya bayaan kiya hai ji ... aur badi sunder and saral sey sher meh ... bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2012, 05:04:08 PM »
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boht khub mali ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2012, 05:04:46 PM »
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boht khub mali ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2012, 05:08:11 PM »
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kal dusroon k duskh mai rone vale the tum...
aaj ansuon ka udate ho mazaak kun?

kya baat kahi hai malli g......

agar mai RAO de sakta to zaroor deta... par afsos.....

boht khoob likha apne daad dena chahunga Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2012, 08:00:17 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2012, 03:07:17 PM »
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wah wah wah ... bahut khoob nazariya bayaan kiya hai ji ... aur badi sunder and saral sey sher meh ... bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh

thanks for the appreciation ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2012, 03:07:52 PM »
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boht khub mali ji
thanks ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2012, 03:08:37 PM »
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kal dusroon k duskh mai rone vale the tum...
aaj ansuon ka udate ho mazaak kun?

kya baat kahi hai malli g......

agar mai RAO de sakta to zaroor deta... par afsos.....

boht khoob likha apne daad dena chahunga Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2012, 03:09:23 PM »
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waah waah

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«Reply #10 on: June 04, 2012, 03:27:47 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Malli ji....!!!
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