-----/// Kyun chale jaane ki baat karte ho /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 16, 2012, 08:21:14 PM
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batao bhala kitni der hui hai tumhe aaye huye,
jaana kyun tum abhi se jaane ki baat karte ho,
abhi to humne tumhe thik se dekha bhi nahi hai,
aur tum is tarha laut jaane ki baat karte ho,

ye aadat achchi nahi tumhaari hume jalaane ki,
dil pe teer chalaake muskuraane ki baat karte ho,
hum to ghayal hain tumhaare ishq me o jaanaa,
aur tum humse ab dil churaane ki baat karte ho,

zaraa baitho do ghadi saamne tumhe dekh le hum,
doob jaayen kuch der tumhaari aankhon me hum,
kuch pal baith ke kuch pyaari baatein kar lo,
kyun aane se pehle hi jaane ki baat karte ho,

kya tumhe maaloom hai kya haal hai mere dil ka,
kyun har baar dil tod jaane ki baat karte ho,
pal bhar ke liye hi saath milta hai tumhaaraa,
aur tum bas saath chhod jaane ki bat karte ho,

kai baar toota hai ye dil is shahar mein pehle,
ab fir se tum mera dil todne ki baat karte ho,
badi mushkil se jeene ki aadat daali hai maine,
aur tum mujhe ab mar jaane ki baat karte ho....

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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2012, 02:46:06 AM »
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Kya khoob peskas h.
Dil ko khush kar gayi.
Lakho daad hajir h.
Plz kabool kare.
Daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad.
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2012, 03:59:11 AM »
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waah Hriday ji daad daad
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2012, 10:40:19 AM »
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waaaaaah waaaaaah bahut hi badiya hriday jii...bahut khub....Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2012, 09:10:54 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 16, 2012, 08:21:14 PM
batao bhala kitni der hui hai tumhe aaye huye,
jaana kyun tum abhi se jaane ki baat karte ho,
abhi to humne tumhe thik se dekha bhi nahi hai,
aur tum is tarha laut jaane ki baat karte ho,

ye aadat achchi nahi tumhaari hume jalaane ki,
dil pe teer chalaake muskuraane ki baat karte ho,
hum to ghayal hain tumhaare ishq me o jaanaa,
aur tum humse ab dil churaane ki baat karte ho,

zaraa baitho do ghadi saamne tumhe dekh le hum,
doob jaayen kuch der tumhaari aankhon me hum,
kuch pal baith ke kuch pyaari baatein kar lo,
kyun aane se pehle hi jaane ki baat karte ho,

kya tumhe maaloom hai kya haal hai mere dil ka,
kyun har baar dil tod jaane ki baat karte ho,
pal bhar ke liye hi saath milta hai tumhaaraa,
aur tum bas saath chhod jaane ki bat karte ho,

kai baar toota hai ye dil is shahar mein pehle,
ab fir se tum mera dil todne ki baat karte ho,
badi mushkil se jeene ki aadat daali hai maine,
aur tum mujhe ab mar jaane ki baat karte ho....

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 aur tumhein koi kaam nahin...,
 sirf dil lagaane ki baat karte ho..., icon_flower icon_flower

  thik hai acha karte ho. nice
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 06:26:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa bhaii... itne saare daad k liye....!!!

Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 17, 2012, 02:46:06 AM
Kya khoob peskas h.
Dil ko khush kar gayi.
Lakho daad hajir h.
Plz kabool kare.
Daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad daad.
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2012, 06:26:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 17, 2012, 03:59:11 AM
waah Hriday ji daad daad
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2012, 12:43:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

Quote from: dolly on April 17, 2012, 10:40:19 AM
waaaaaah waaaaaah bahut hi badiya hriday jii...bahut khub....Usual Smile
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji...!!!

Quote from: dolly on April 17, 2012, 10:40:19 AM
waaaaaah waaaaaah bahut hi badiya hriday jii...bahut khub....Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2012, 06:56:18 PM »
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Ji koshish to bahut karta hoon ki kuch aur karun par dil lagaane k alaawaa kisi aur cheez me mann hi nahi lagta ... tongue3

bahut bahut shukriya meri koshish ko waqt dene ke liye aur pasand karne k liye....!!!

Quote from: Sheba on April 17, 2012, 09:10:54 PM

 aur tumhein koi kaam nahin...,
 sirf dil lagaane ki baat karte ho..., icon_flower icon_flower

 thik hai acha karte ho. nice
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2013, 03:52:20 PM »
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just a great poem!
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2013, 03:52:42 PM »
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thank u soooo much Jaikumar ji.....!!!

Quote from: Jaikumar Rana on February 12, 2013, 03:52:20 PM
just a great poem!
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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2013, 03:24:56 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Ravi ji.....!!!

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 25, 2013, 03:24:56 AM
Bahut Khoob.
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Kyaa baat hai hriday sir,
nice 1,
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