~Kyun mujhe rula diya~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 07, 2010, 08:28:15 PM
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Aj Khwaish Dost ka ek kalam parra toh kuch apna apna sa mehsoos hua aur dil kuch keh gaya..

Iss nazm main ek sawal puchna chahta hoon uss shaks se kay akhir mujhe kyun rula diya??

Shayad ap main se bahaut yeh sawal kisi se puchna chahte ho..

Mere dil ko ek shaks ne pathar sa bana diya,
Yaaron ek shaks ne ‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana diya..

Dil se muskurana ab mujhe guzre zamane ki baat lagti hai,
Mohobat main doobe dil ko kisi ne askhon main tairna seekha diya,
Yaaron ek shaks ne ‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana diya..

Dil se dua nikalti hai kay kash main zindagi ko peeche le ja sakta,
Teri yaad ne mujhe na mumkin duaein mangna bhi seekha diya,
Yaaron ek shaks ne ‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana diya..

Kabhi tere khaton main ehsaas mehsoos karta tha, aj bas lavz nazar ate hai,
Tujse judai ne mujhe zinda lash bankar jeena seekha diya,
Yaaron ek shaks ne ‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana diya..

Jab haath chorrna tha mera toh ae Zalim tune thama kyun,
Kisi ki mohobat kay badle tune ashkon ka tofa diya kyun,
Ae Zalim tune mujhe kyun yeh sila diya,
Ae Zalim tune mujhe kyun rula diya,
Kyun tune ‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana diya..!

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2010, 04:14:46 AM »
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Rahim ji except karen bohot khubsurat hai,
aapne theek kaha yahi sawaal kayi log na jaane kayee log se puchna chahte hai,
khair dard wahi samajh sakta hai jisko kabhi dard hua ho,
aapne bohot aachi lines ka istemal kiya,mujhe to shayri ki gehraai ka zyada andaza nahi lekin bohot khoob,
aap ke liye 2 lines arz karna chahta hu,
"RULAAYA USNE TUJHE YE USKI NAADANI THI,
AAJ WO APNI NADAANI PAR BHI ROO NA PAYEGA YOUNHI"

                     **/-A Falling Tear-/** Muzammil,
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2010, 10:08:04 AM »
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Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob bhai rahim!!!

Yoindia Ki iss Mehfil mei aisa koi shaks main jab bhi yaad karta hoon, jo dil ko kaagaz par utaar de to Rahim aapka nam humesha pehle aata hai..

bahut khoobsurti se dil ke jabzo ko lafz diye hai apne..par yaar, meri nazm padhkar aap roye yeh jaankar dil ko acha nahi laga..yaar roya naa karo,Humesha muskuraya karo..

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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2010, 10:15:10 AM »
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Quote from: Muzammil, on October 08, 2010, 04:14:46 AM
Rahim ji except karen bohot khubsurat hai,
aapne theek kaha yahi sawaal kayi log na jaane kayee log se puchna chahte hai,
khair dard wahi samajh sakta hai jisko kabhi dard hua ho,
aapne bohot aachi lines ka istemal kiya,mujhe to shayri ki gehraai ka zyada andaza nahi lekin bohot khoob,
aap ke liye 2 lines arz karna chahta hu,
"RULAAYA USNE TUJHE YE USKI NAADANI THI,
AAJ WO APNI NADAANI PAR BHI ROO NA PAYEGA YOUNHI"

                     **/-A Falling Tear-/** Muzammil,
Muzammil jee bahaut bahaut shukriya..Teh dil se shukriya..
Mujhe apki arz ki hui do lines bahauttttttttttttt achi lagi..
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2010, 10:20:45 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 08, 2010, 10:08:04 AM
Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob bhai rahim!!!

Yoindia Ki iss Mehfil mei aisa koi shaks main jab bhi yaad karta hoon, jo dil ko kaaz par utaar de to Rahim aapka nam humesha pehle aata hai..

bahut khoobsurti se dil ke jabzo ko lafz diye hai apne..par yaar, meri nazm padhkar aap roye yeh jaankar dil ko acha nahi laga..yaar roya naa karo,Humesha muskuraya karo..

Bahut ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khwaish Dost, bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Apka yeh reply parr kar bata nahin sakta kay kitni khushi hui.
Dost yeh toh apke kalam ka jadoo tha jo dil main uttar gaya aur kuch yaadein jaga gaya..Yunhi likte rahiyega..
Sada muskurate rahein..
Khush rahein..
bahaut sara pyaar aur anginat duaein..!
Rahim.!
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2010, 05:48:49 PM »
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Rahim ji aapka kalam bahoot pasand aaya Daad dher sari isi tarah likhte rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2010, 06:35:21 PM »
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Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

Aapke ahsaas O khayaal aur dil se uththe sawaal behad
achche lage ....

Is sawaal ke jawaab meiN aik choti si short story hai...
Kabhi sunayeNge... abhi to waqt ijazat nahi deta hume..

Aap likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez...... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2010, 07:13:53 PM »
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Shukriya Yasmeen jee..
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2010, 07:16:18 PM »
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Shukriya Parwaaz jee..Intezar rahega apki kahani ka..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2010, 09:18:59 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhai...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2010, 10:44:49 AM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2011, 02:45:19 PM »
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wah kya baat hai dost……
dil ke ehsaas yun likh gaye jese koi choti si bat ho…
kamaal ho bas…

dher saari duayen aapko dost…
khus rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2011, 03:03:29 PM »
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boht khoob rahim ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2011, 03:03:50 PM »
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boht khoob rahim ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2011, 08:13:06 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on April 24, 2011, 02:45:19 PM
wah kya baat hai dost……
dil ke ehsaas yun likh gaye jese koi choti si bat ho…
kamaal ho bas…

dher saari duayen aapko dost…
khus rahiye
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Apka teh teh dil se shukriya KillBill dost..
Umm choti si baat toh nahin hai mager jab dil bol
parrta hai, toh khud hairan hojata hoon kay kaise itni
asani se dil ko baha diya..!
Khush rahiye.!
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