~*~ Labon se guftugu ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on June 02, 2011, 02:59:58 PM
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Mere ashkon se zyada ghire kabhi toh,
Ae Khuda mujhe aisi barsaat chahiye..

Kisi se lagayi akhri umeed tak ko mita de,
Ae Khuda mujhe aisi laat chahiye..

‘Main tumse be-inteha mohobat karti hoon 'Khamosh'’,
Kisi kay dil se mujhe aisi koi baat chahiye..

Kisi kay lab mere labon se guftugu karte rahe,
Thand bhari mujhe aisi koi raat chahiye..

Harte ayi wafa khel-e-mohobat main hamesha,
Toot kar ghire bewaffai; mujhe aisi maat chahiye..

Mohobat kay dariya main raha mager pyaasa 'Khamosh',
Jahan se mile sirf ek qatra mohobat; mujhe aisa koi ghaat chahiye..

Ghaat se mera matlab tha jahan se pani bharte hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2011, 03:42:53 PM »
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kisi ke lub mere labo se………
haaye kya mast line likha hai dost…

behad laajawab peshkas…
bht bht saari daad
khus rho bhai
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2011, 07:25:40 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab bahut achche aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai ...
Aur andaaz e bayaaN bhi behad khoob raha... Usual Smile

Is achchi aur khub kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2011, 08:15:00 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on June 02, 2011, 03:42:53 PM
kisi ke lub mere labo se………
haaye kya mast line likha hai dost…

behad laajawab peshkas…
bht bht saari daad
khus rho bhai
Teh teh dil se shukriya Nirala dost..
Haan wohi ek line baar baar repeat karte gaya..
Saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2011, 08:27:27 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 02, 2011, 07:25:40 PM
Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab bahut achche aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai ...
Aur andaaz e bayaaN bhi behad khoob raha... Usual Smile

Is achchi aur khub kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

Parwaaz jee,
Jab ap waqt de kar comment karte hai toh dil ko bahuat khushi hoti hai..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Teh teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2011, 02:37:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2011, 07:48:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 03, 2011, 02:37:09 PM
Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2011, 02:24:33 AM »
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bahut khub
aati nahi need jami per ab hame
sone ke liye hame ab khat*chahiye

*charpayi/wooden bed
Quote from: -Rahim- on June 02, 2011, 02:59:58 PM
Mere ashkon se zyada ghire kabhi toh,
Ae Khuda mujhe aisi barsaat chahiye..

Kisi se lagayi akhri umeed tak ko mita de,
Ae Khuda mujhe aisi laat chahiye..

‘Main tumse be-inteha mohobat karti hoon 'Khamosh'’,
Kisi kay dil se mujhe aisi koi baat chahiye..

Kisi kay lab mere labon se guftugu karte rahe,
Thand bhari mujhe aisi koi raat chahiye..

Harte ayi wafa khel-e-mohobat main hamesha,
Toot kar ghire bewaffai; mujhe aisi maat chahiye..

Mohobat kay dariya main raha mager pyaasa 'Khamosh',
Jahan se mile sirf ek qatra mohobat; mujhe aisa koi ghaat chahiye..

Ghaat se mera matlab tha jahan se pani bharte hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2011, 03:57:25 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Rahim ji kya baat hai bahut khoob.......
 
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2011, 09:47:27 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 04, 2011, 02:24:33 AM
bahut khub
aati nahi need jami per ab hame
sone ke liye hame ab khat*chahiye

*charpayi/wooden bed
Shukriya Manoj jee..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #10 on: June 04, 2011, 09:50:37 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 04, 2011, 03:57:25 AM
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Rahim ji kya baat hai bahut khoob.......
 
Teh teh dil se shukriya Suresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2011, 07:14:36 AM »
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Rahim Mere Bhai.. Bahut khooooooob Likha hai Yaaaaaaaaaaaar... Ehasaason Ko lafzon me behad khubsoorati se utaara hai aapne.. lajawab peshkash hai... Applause Applause



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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2011, 09:06:14 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on June 06, 2011, 07:14:36 AM
Rahim Mere Bhai.. Bahut khooooooob Likha hai Yaaaaaaaaaaaar... Ehasaason Ko lafzon me behad khubsoorati se utaara hai aapne.. lajawab peshkash hai... Applause Applause



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Teh teh dil se shukriya Vikas bhai..
Dil ko ek ajeeb khushi milti hai apka comment dekh kar..
Khush rahiye..!
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